Comment from Rachelle Allen

Exceptional

Love it! And the photo to accentuate it, too! A perfect offering for the senryu contest! I trust I'll be seeing this is the winner's circle!! Xoxoxoxo

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024

Thank you so much :)

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I can't figure out if this is funny or sad. It was thought-provoking, if nothing else. You got the syllable counts right, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024

I think I replied to this twice. Thank you! Seriously it's a big deal to get someone to think about your writing and put in a real review. Thank you :)

Comment from Bryce 1

Excellent

I think i already graded this one. I dig it though, still. I love a short poem. It sums everything up and is a great tell on if the author is a good poet. This is good

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024

Thanks Bryce! I really appreciate that. Really, thank you.