Phases (of the Moon)
Each phase in thyme3 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well, you certainly know more than me so this has been quite an education which you've skilfully conveyed in verse form while adding dramatic images. Well done and good luck with your excellent post! Debbie
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Well, you certainly know more than me so this has been quite an education which you've skilfully conveyed in verse form while adding dramatic images. Well done and good luck with your excellent post! Debbie
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a delightful poem! I love how you've captured the moon's phases with such playful rhymes. It's a wonderful blend of science and poetry.
Well done!
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What a delightful poem! I love how you've captured the moon's phases with such playful rhymes. It's a wonderful blend of science and poetry.
Well done!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This is a nice poem about the lifecycle of the moon. You describe the different phases of the moon and of course everybody's favorite is the full moon. I'm not sure what an autumm
moon is, but there's such a thing.
What does this mean? Gibbous? Did you expect me to go out to the Internet to find out what it means? You know I might not ever come back to your poem if I did that.
Why can't you put it in your notes so people are not forced to go out to the Internet? Number one I wouldn't use words that I didn't think everybody knew and number two. If I did, I would provide a definition in my notes because I think the next time this happens, I'm not going out I'm just going to assume Something whether it's right or not and that's what I'm doing here. I'm not going to go out to the Internet and look this up. I don't know what it means and it could be very important that I know what it means in order to review your poem That's tough. I'm just not going to go out there.
Here. Issue doesn't make sense. Are you sure you didn't mean usher?
"The moon issues in each "
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This is a nice poem about the lifecycle of the moon. You describe the different phases of the moon and of course everybody's favorite is the full moon. I'm not sure what an autumm
moon is, but there's such a thing.
What does this mean? Gibbous? Did you expect me to go out to the Internet to find out what it means? You know I might not ever come back to your poem if I did that.
Why can't you put it in your notes so people are not forced to go out to the Internet? Number one I wouldn't use words that I didn't think everybody knew and number two. If I did, I would provide a definition in my notes because I think the next time this happens, I'm not going out I'm just going to assume Something whether it's right or not and that's what I'm doing here. I'm not going to go out to the Internet and look this up. I don't know what it means and it could be very important that I know what it means in order to review your poem That's tough. I'm just not going to go out there.
Here. Issue doesn't make sense. Are you sure you didn't mean usher?
"The moon issues in each "
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
