Breathe
As Summer transitions Autumn approaches5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Breathe, has the proper formatting and brings the obvious sounds of the changing seasons which include the rattling leaves tat are ground bound.
This 5-7-5, Breathe, has the proper formatting and brings the obvious sounds of the changing seasons which include the rattling leaves tat are ground bound.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
Comment from Caperton Tissot
Beautiful haiku. I can feel the crisp air moving the leaves. Love the analogy to breath. The poem captures the essence of autumn without sounding trite.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
Beautiful haiku. I can feel the crisp air moving the leaves. Love the analogy to breath. The poem captures the essence of autumn without sounding trite.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Caperton,
Thank you for the six star review. Your comments are valued and highly appreciated.
BBye50
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I could feel the chill in the air here as Autumn takes hold and we see the wonderful colours of gold and feel the cool breezes, much enjoyed, a fine Haiku, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
I could feel the chill in the air here as Autumn takes hold and we see the wonderful colours of gold and feel the cool breezes, much enjoyed, a fine Haiku, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Dolly,
Thank you for your wonderful review. Your reviews are always welcomed and are lift to my spirit.
BBye50
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your beautifully captures autumn with wonderful imagery. The "crisp winds" and "golden cascades" are great word choices. They capture an almost magical quality. he elegance of your words reflect the quiet beauty of fall perfectly.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
Your beautifully captures autumn with wonderful imagery. The "crisp winds" and "golden cascades" are great word choices. They capture an almost magical quality. he elegance of your words reflect the quiet beauty of fall perfectly.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Michael,
Thank you for your wonderful review. Your reviews are always welcomed and are lift to my spirit.
BBye50
Comment from RodG
You describe the change of season very well in this Nature 5-7-5.
Nice use of personification to describe the whispering winds, the dancing leaves, and Autumn's breath.
Rod
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
You describe the change of season very well in this Nature 5-7-5.
Nice use of personification to describe the whispering winds, the dancing leaves, and Autumn's breath.
Rod
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Rod,
Thank you for your wonderful review. Your reviews are always welcomed and are a lift to my spirit.
BBye50
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You are most welcome.