His Silence
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7 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
Another great addition, Jacob. You are moving the story along nicely and keeping your readers in suspense. Will Danielle go to the place he asked? Only time will tell.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Another great addition, Jacob. You are moving the story along nicely and keeping your readers in suspense. Will Danielle go to the place he asked? Only time will tell.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Thank you, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
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My pleasure, Jacob.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Apparently, he just wanted to see his sister and talk to her. He evidently does not think she will understand unless she sees something for herself. He really doesn't regret killing their parents. That is scary.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Apparently, he just wanted to see his sister and talk to her. He evidently does not think she will understand unless she sees something for herself. He really doesn't regret killing their parents. That is scary.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Thank you, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A shorter chapter as Harvey is given some basic first aid and reflects sympathetically on Danielle's response to him. The nest stage for Danielle will be an interesting one. Well done, Jacob, for keeping the suspense going so well. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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A shorter chapter as Harvey is given some basic first aid and reflects sympathetically on Danielle's response to him. The nest stage for Danielle will be an interesting one. Well done, Jacob, for keeping the suspense going so well. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Thank you Debbie, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
It seems he doesn't hold her reaction against his sister. I guess he thinks if he tells her without her seeing the place where he wants her to visit what he did won't make any sense. I think she will evenually go.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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It seems he doesn't hold her reaction against his sister. I guess he thinks if he tells her without her seeing the place where he wants her to visit what he did won't make any sense. I think she will evenually go.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This chapter lets the reader know that Harvey has learned to control his emotions, or at least around people of authority like the doctor in the prison. He still feels justified in what happened years before. Now I wonder if Danielle will send a barrage of questions over to Jeremiah, and how long before she plans a trip to the house Harvey mentioned?
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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This chapter lets the reader know that Harvey has learned to control his emotions, or at least around people of authority like the doctor in the prison. He still feels justified in what happened years before. Now I wonder if Danielle will send a barrage of questions over to Jeremiah, and how long before she plans a trip to the house Harvey mentioned?
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the six stars, I'm really pleased that you liked it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I do hope Jeremiah does answer some questions for Danielle. Somebody needs to. Besides I want answers.
the doctor had asked him, after he'd sat down. (you can omit 'down', it's understood)
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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I do hope Jeremiah does answer some questions for Danielle. Somebody needs to. Besides I want answers.
the doctor had asked him, after he'd sat down. (you can omit 'down', it's understood)
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you Barbara, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
A good, calming chapter to ease that reader back into the story and let some of the tension go. Nice job and I look forward to seeing where we go from her... Will Danielle immediately confront Jeremiah? Will he offer any information? Will she go to the house?
We shall see....
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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A good, calming chapter to ease that reader back into the story and let some of the tension go. Nice job and I look forward to seeing where we go from her... Will Danielle immediately confront Jeremiah? Will he offer any information? Will she go to the house?
We shall see....
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you Carol, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.