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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I wonder if the memories have changed or your view of them have changed. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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I wonder if the memories have changed or your view of them have changed. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your haiku effectively captures the essence of personal transformation and the unexpected nature of memories. The phrase "Popping up for some reason" adds a layer of intrigue, highlighting how memories can resurface unpredictably, often bringing reflections on how we've evolved. The final line, "I have changed a lot," provides a strong sense of closure, acknowledging the growth and shifts that have occurred over time. Overall, it's a reflective and thought-provoking piece that resonates with the universal experience of change and memory.
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Your haiku effectively captures the essence of personal transformation and the unexpected nature of memories. The phrase "Popping up for some reason" adds a layer of intrigue, highlighting how memories can resurface unpredictably, often bringing reflections on how we've evolved. The final line, "I have changed a lot," provides a strong sense of closure, acknowledging the growth and shifts that have occurred over time. Overall, it's a reflective and thought-provoking piece that resonates with the universal experience of change and memory.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
Comment from papa55mike
It is amazing how many things will pop into your mind. Mine is usually the stupid things I've done. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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It is amazing how many things will pop into your mind. Mine is usually the stupid things I've done. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
