Comment from
barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this rhyming contest entry with us. I'm struggling to see the rhyming scheme, but maybe it's just me. I want to wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Your writing is wonderful. I think it is full of raw emotion. It drew me in completely. The intensity of your words and the depth of feeling you express is wonderful. Your ability to convey such complex emotions is truly remarkable - keep sharing your voice, it's so impactful!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024