Spirited Justice
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Angelo has the same disease that most people in our world have today. They don't seem to realize that we have two eyes, two ears, and one mouth for a reason. Two eyes to see twice as much. Two ears, so that we can listen twice as much. But they don't get the hint of why they only have one mouth. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Angelo has the same disease that most people in our world have today. They don't seem to realize that we have two eyes, two ears, and one mouth for a reason. Two eyes to see twice as much. Two ears, so that we can listen twice as much. But they don't get the hint of why they only have one mouth. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Good morning! Thanks for stopping by and leaving me your words of wisdom... and a smile! I appreciate it very much. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend....
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Wow, that was a fast rescue, and Angelo had no idea what was happening. So many situations are going on in this book; I don't know how you keep them all straight. You're amazing! Another good chapter! Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Wow, that was a fast rescue, and Angelo had no idea what was happening. So many situations are going on in this book; I don't know how you keep them all straight. You're amazing! Another good chapter! Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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A clean get-away! Oh so sorry...that was a car wash joke that just popped in my head. LOL Some times I think I am losing it! Thanks as always, Carol. Hope you and your husband are doing better and that you can enjpy a nice long weekend.
Smiles, Carol
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Love the car=wash joke! Enjoy your long weekend also. Carol
Comment from karenina
Number one. Hurrah! I've caught up!
Number two: The killing in the car wash was so spine-tingly frightening I swear you could be writing for the Godfather.
Angelo better realize no matter what he's ordered to do -- Papa Bear will override him.
WOW.
This was awesome Carol.
Karenina
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Number one. Hurrah! I've caught up!
Number two: The killing in the car wash was so spine-tingly frightening I swear you could be writing for the Godfather.
Angelo better realize no matter what he's ordered to do -- Papa Bear will override him.
WOW.
This was awesome Carol.
Karenina
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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YES! I couldn't wait to see what you thought of the car wash scene...I thought it was ingenious but not too many commented... Guess I just expect too much. And that key is still out there somewhere!!!!! I doubt it was left with Jose.
Smiles....You are awesome for reading all of those chapters at one time. You make my heart go pitter patter! thank you!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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I've been nibbling away at reviews but wanted to carve out a big enough slice of time to read ALL of your chapters in one sitting. It was such a treat!
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thank you! You are an angel!
Comment from BethShelby
That was a smooth operation but it doesn't sound like jose is in very good condition for a flight home. You story are always well thought out and interesting to read.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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That was a smooth operation but it doesn't sound like jose is in very good condition for a flight home. You story are always well thought out and interesting to read.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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I think Carlos will have a top knotch medical team on that jet before Jose ever gets to it...I just wonder if he learns anything from this. thanks for the review and comments.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
You definitely know how to write intense chapters, Carol and this one was definitely intense. The dialogue between your characters is brilliant and you're moving the story along all the time which is excellent. That was a great line to end your chapter on. Another excellent piece, I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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You definitely know how to write intense chapters, Carol and this one was definitely intense. The dialogue between your characters is brilliant and you're moving the story along all the time which is excellent. That was a great line to end your chapter on. Another excellent piece, I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Jacob...from one mystery writer to another, it's very thoughtful and appreciated how you consider what happens in my stories. Thank you as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with this chapter although, I hope that Angelo will wise up to Carlos. The nerve of that man to send Angelo to help rescue his son and not tell him that he ended up doing it himself. If he has so many doing his bidding, he's a dangerous man.
Hope Garth will quickly piece things together.
Did Naomi get to the safe hospital?
I'm sure you'll pull all you're juggling together!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Great job with this chapter although, I hope that Angelo will wise up to Carlos. The nerve of that man to send Angelo to help rescue his son and not tell him that he ended up doing it himself. If he has so many doing his bidding, he's a dangerous man.
Hope Garth will quickly piece things together.
Did Naomi get to the safe hospital?
I'm sure you'll pull all you're juggling together!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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I think Angelo has seen how Carlos prefers to wrok his power to his own advantage.... and now he will try to concern himself with Naomi. Garth's working on it and Donatelli's raising cane...These two need to come to terms before Eleanor clobbers them both. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Your brain must be racing non-stop! There's drama everywhere, and people who are risking everything to get at the truth, and others risking everything to hide the truth. Big stakes are involved. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Your brain must be racing non-stop! There's drama everywhere, and people who are risking everything to get at the truth, and others risking everything to hide the truth. Big stakes are involved. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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I must admit that this particular story does have me going in more directions than usual...but they all tie together somewhere. Thanks for following and for the kind review. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Garth may have more trouble protecting Mr. Whittaker than he should have in a prison. Carlos is getting his son back and he obviously doesn't trust Angelo.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Garth may have more trouble protecting Mr. Whittaker than he should have in a prison. Carlos is getting his son back and he obviously doesn't trust Angelo.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Carlos might regret his decisions down the line but for now he was focused on Jose. Hopefully Whitaker is safe and survives because he can provide some important information if someone will listen and believe him.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
You are amazing. Carlos had Angelo trailing the SUV so Carlos could be sure it went through the car wash. Angelo thought he was being helpful and had no clue Carlos was in control. The whole car wash idea and scene was outstanding. I'm sure Angelo is thinking of going to check on Naomi. But I have to get back to the hospital to see what Garth is doing. I love it. There's action everywhere.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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You are amazing. Carlos had Angelo trailing the SUV so Carlos could be sure it went through the car wash. Angelo thought he was being helpful and had no clue Carlos was in control. The whole car wash idea and scene was outstanding. I'm sure Angelo is thinking of going to check on Naomi. But I have to get back to the hospital to see what Garth is doing. I love it. There's action everywhere.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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I thought the car wash destraction was awesome but not too many people mentioned it. I thank you for appreciating that detail. And yes, Angelo is thinking about Naomi especially since he can't believe a mobster is responsible for her care. Funny world!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
So, it looks like Jose is out of danger, we perhaps so, but of course his loss of blood must be a concern, but getting smashed in the head by one of Carlos' men, must be a blow, beautifully written Carol, an excellent episode, you've cleaned up a few loose ends, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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So, it looks like Jose is out of danger, we perhaps so, but of course his loss of blood must be a concern, but getting smashed in the head by one of Carlos' men, must be a blow, beautifully written Carol, an excellent episode, you've cleaned up a few loose ends, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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I never know about Jose...he doesn't seem to appreciate the luck he gets nor does he ever stay out of trouble. He thinks life is a free ride...wonder if he learns this time.
Smiles, Carol
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I think he might
