Spirited Justice
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Comment from Ulla
So Johan, was counting on being a German citizen, but it turns out that he's actually American. I can understand why he's shocked. All I'm asking is, what now? Hugs, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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So Johan, was counting on being a German citizen, but it turns out that he's actually American. I can understand why he's shocked. All I'm asking is, what now? Hugs, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Now he either does some fast talking and sharing what he knows about the cases, or he's headed for a long stay in prison.... I think he wil talk!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
So Josh is in custody handcuffed and awaiting interrogation when Hilda, very hurt consulate wants to know why he did what he did, under questioning by Donatelli and no help from the German consulate, and after feeling guilty about Hilda, he agrees to help Donatelli with the investigation, great post Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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So Josh is in custody handcuffed and awaiting interrogation when Hilda, very hurt consulate wants to know why he did what he did, under questioning by Donatelli and no help from the German consulate, and after feeling guilty about Hilda, he agrees to help Donatelli with the investigation, great post Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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We're moving forward...now we need to find Jose. and Garth and Donatelli need to settle their feud. So much to do!!!
Thanks, Roy!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
So Danni gets a little praise for all her hard work. You're giving ghosts a repsectible reputation most of us thought they were something to dreaded and feared. If one comes to visit you, you'll like invite the lunch. Just kidding. This is well written and interesting. I'm sure ther news that he is US citizen is shocking for Johan.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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So Danni gets a little praise for all her hard work. You're giving ghosts a repsectible reputation most of us thought they were something to dreaded and feared. If one comes to visit you, you'll like invite the lunch. Just kidding. This is well written and interesting. I'm sure ther news that he is US citizen is shocking for Johan.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Yes, I am sure Johan counted on his German citizenship to protect him if things backfired... Now he's on his own. The only way to truly save himself is by coming clean with what he knows. thanks so mych, Beth
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
So Danni gets a little praise for all her hard work. You're giving ghosts a repsectible reputation most of us thought they were something to dreaded and feared. If one comes to visit you, you'll like invite the lunch. Just kidding. This is well written and interesting. I'm sure ther news that he is US citizen is shocking for Johan.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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So Danni gets a little praise for all her hard work. You're giving ghosts a repsectible reputation most of us thought they were something to dreaded and feared. If one comes to visit you, you'll like invite the lunch. Just kidding. This is well written and interesting. I'm sure ther news that he is US citizen is shocking for Johan.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Hi again...For some odd reason I got this review twice...So I will just say thank you once again.
Smiles, Carol
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Yes, I got you post twice. I had already read and thought I had answered it . It is the ghosts having a little fun.
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You just might have that right, Beth! LOL
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Okay, now we are getting somewhere. I can't wait to see who all in involved and how we're going solve this crime. I can't wait until Garth and Matthew have a meal together and work things out between themselves.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Okay, now we are getting somewhere. I can't wait to see who all in involved and how we're going solve this crime. I can't wait until Garth and Matthew have a meal together and work things out between themselves.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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I'm working on it! I've got there time at the farm already worked out. Now if I could get to all the rest that needs to happen first. Thanks so much for the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Good work from Danni! Johan's in a bit of a pickle. Suggestion: Donatelli (continued), Johan quietly (mumbled) -- all your other verbs are in past tense. Lots of good details and dialogue in this chapter. Hugs! Carol
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Good work from Danni! Johan's in a bit of a pickle. Suggestion: Donatelli (continued), Johan quietly (mumbled) -- all your other verbs are in past tense. Lots of good details and dialogue in this chapter. Hugs! Carol
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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that's what I get when I write notes of where I am headed and then put them in the story... wrong tense. thank you for catching it. I fixed them. Appreciate your support and the review.
Smiles, Carol
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Sorry, sometimes the editor in my head just won't quit!
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Don't be sorry. I need all the help I can get because if my first book publishes, this one will be next. Proofing and getting right is a struggle. Thanks!
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Good to know you're seeking publication. Best wishes on that.
Comment from Ric Myworld
A call from the United Nations Plaza in New York is enough in itself to put a person to wondering what the heck is going on. But American citizens, like Johan, don't have to worry. Well, unless they open their big mouths and say too much . . . Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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A call from the United Nations Plaza in New York is enough in itself to put a person to wondering what the heck is going on. But American citizens, like Johan, don't have to worry. Well, unless they open their big mouths and say too much . . . Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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I think Johan is stunned at the moment, realizing his back up and packed up and left. Now his choice is to carry the weight or help Donatelli work things out.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
The poor man. What has been done to him, was cruel. I'm hoping that Garth and Matthew will get together soon, and with Johan and bring down everyone involved. But they won't be able to touch those creeps in the German embassy. And Hilda? I think she will soon discover that Johan does have feelings for her. What a web we weave, Carol. You are a master story teller!! How you do it, I have no idea. Well done, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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The poor man. What has been done to him, was cruel. I'm hoping that Garth and Matthew will get together soon, and with Johan and bring down everyone involved. But they won't be able to touch those creeps in the German embassy. And Hilda? I think she will soon discover that Johan does have feelings for her. What a web we weave, Carol. You are a master story teller!! How you do it, I have no idea. Well done, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Good day to you, dear Sandra. What a wonderful way to start my morning with your smiling face greeting me. And of course, your kind review always brightens my day and puffs out my chest with happiness and pride. I admire your abilities so much and when you praise mine I can't tell you how awesome it makes me feel. thank you for always being there for me.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
I'm a pushover. I wanted to believe Johan and Hilda could possibly be a real "item" ~ but it's looking like that wasn't the case. I liked that Danni was prompted by Elanor to "start at the beginning" -- that's going to earn Danni some ghostly street cred!
There is a lot to grasp here. It's so like you to have side-by-side running plots that intersect at just the right moment.
On to the next chapter!
Karenina
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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I'm a pushover. I wanted to believe Johan and Hilda could possibly be a real "item" ~ but it's looking like that wasn't the case. I liked that Danni was prompted by Elanor to "start at the beginning" -- that's going to earn Danni some ghostly street cred!
There is a lot to grasp here. It's so like you to have side-by-side running plots that intersect at just the right moment.
On to the next chapter!
Karenina
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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I did too! I think Johan hadn't expected to feel any chemistry with Hilda and when he accepted the job it was all about dollar signs. Now he's in too deep! I too thought Eleanor's sublte suggestion and then her thumbs up to Danni was heartwarming and gave her a welcomed boost.
Smiles, Carol
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I was CERTAIN I would see you in the "of the month" nominations!
I don't know how you were overlooked!
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LOL...You are so cute!
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No. I'm righteously indignant!
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Me too! Number one Novel writer doesn't even get a signal nod! Poor me... a token for my birthday would have been nice. LOL
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Seriously...
Those nominees got a break...
Yours is easily worthy and would have been a huge contender to win...
Not sure how you got overlooked...
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There are going to think I paid you for all this promoting!!! You are the best!
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Just opining, which is my right...
Also, free of charge!
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I will admit I was surprised that I didn't at least make the list...maybe no votes but on the list. I didn't make it with any of the others either. Don't know what the criteria is, but that's life. Those who loved it, read it, and that's all the really matters.
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You are number one in my book...
Comment from Wendy G
That discovery certainly pulled the rug out from under Johan's feet. It will be interesting to be filled in in the next chapter with what he knows. Then Donatello will have some good information to share with Garth. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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That discovery certainly pulled the rug out from under Johan's feet. It will be interesting to be filled in in the next chapter with what he knows. Then Donatello will have some good information to share with Garth. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Yes, I imagine Johan has so many thoughts running through his head at the moment. and I can't wait for Donatelli and Garth to compare notes. thank you so much.
Smiles, Carol
