Celestial Tapestry
Starry sky enjoyed by lovers on an evening walk,5 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I love the idea of lovers walking hand in hand enjoying the star light night. I'm a hopeless romantic. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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I love the idea of lovers walking hand in hand enjoying the star light night. I'm a hopeless romantic. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Pleased you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for the read and review.
Comment from GoWiSt
"Starry sky enjoyed by lovers on an evening walk," How so sweet.
"Celestial Tapestry" Isn't it wonderful what nature has woven?
"Lovers evening walk enjoyed" Lovers'--apostrophe needed.
A very nice loop poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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"Starry sky enjoyed by lovers on an evening walk," How so sweet.
"Celestial Tapestry" Isn't it wonderful what nature has woven?
"Lovers evening walk enjoyed" Lovers'--apostrophe needed.
A very nice loop poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Yep, missed that one again. Thanks for the review and the correction.
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Harry,
This is such a lovely loop poem. (This genre of poem can be very difficult to write)
I'm a stargazer; the night sky is always full of such wonders. (A partial eclipse of the moon is coming this month).
Excellent poem, Harry. I like its title too.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Harry,
This is such a lovely loop poem. (This genre of poem can be very difficult to write)
I'm a stargazer; the night sky is always full of such wonders. (A partial eclipse of the moon is coming this month).
Excellent poem, Harry. I like its title too.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thanks for the read and the review. Glad you are still here after the tornadoes and can gaze at the stars.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Harry.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and loops.
-I like the use of tapestry for the constellations,
and the idea of the stars telling stories.
-A very good closing verse linking the
wonder of stars to the lovers who enjoy them.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Harry.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and loops.
-I like the use of tapestry for the constellations,
and the idea of the stars telling stories.
-A very good closing verse linking the
wonder of stars to the lovers who enjoy them.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your encouraging response. Sincerely appreciated. I will edit.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This loop poem, Celestial Tapestry, has the proper formatting and finds the stories of the gods and ancestors retold while two new souls enjoy the expanse of the sky and the closeness of each other. Nice.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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This loop poem, Celestial Tapestry, has the proper formatting and finds the stories of the gods and ancestors retold while two new souls enjoy the expanse of the sky and the closeness of each other. Nice.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thank you.
