Trish
a South of the Border lover9 total reviews
Comment from Sue Smith
This one made me smile. I can really imagine it being sung by someone in a sombrero. Unfortunately the reference to gas attack made me think of someone with indigestion, and another phrase would have worked better for me at that point. But otherwise it was great.
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This one made me smile. I can really imagine it being sung by someone in a sombrero. Unfortunately the reference to gas attack made me think of someone with indigestion, and another phrase would have worked better for me at that point. But otherwise it was great.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
Comment from Teri7
Jim, This is a very cute and saucy song you have penned for the contest. I could recognize some of the words. Great imagery to go with your words. Blessings, Teri
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Jim, This is a very cute and saucy song you have penned for the contest. I could recognize some of the words. Great imagery to go with your words. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
Comment from Sanku
Just for fun I started studying Spanish . SO I ENJOYED THIS SOND .I THINK READERS SHOULD READ IT ALOUD.. IT HAS A GOOD TEMPO I TRIED SINGING (LOL)
I am not in favour of your using mosquito image . "gas attack' also seemed unromantic. Why notheart attac?
any way it was fun..
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Just for fun I started studying Spanish . SO I ENJOYED THIS SOND .I THINK READERS SHOULD READ IT ALOUD.. IT HAS A GOOD TEMPO I TRIED SINGING (LOL)
I am not in favour of your using mosquito image . "gas attack' also seemed unromantic. Why notheart attac?
any way it was fun..
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
These lyrics, Trish, are a fun-filled dance number and make the observer want to move along with the South of the Border celebration of this marvelous woman. Salute!
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These lyrics, Trish, are a fun-filled dance number and make the observer want to move along with the South of the Border celebration of this marvelous woman. Salute!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
Wow, qué hermosa mujer (What a beautiful woman she is). Trish has me singing along with your song, wishing I could venture back in time to dance with her once again. Wishful thinking. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
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Wow, qué hermosa mujer (What a beautiful woman she is). Trish has me singing along with your song, wishing I could venture back in time to dance with her once again. Wishful thinking. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You succeeded very well with this song contest entry. As I read (aloud - perhaps you should put that advice in the note) I could feel the rythme pounding. The musical element was to the fore. kay
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You succeeded very well with this song contest entry. As I read (aloud - perhaps you should put that advice in the note) I could feel the rythme pounding. The musical element was to the fore. kay
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
Comment from GoWiSt
"a South of the Border lover
Trish" Mmm, she looks like a nice dsh.
'Trish, you're a real hot burrito!" Still, try not to bite too hard.
"Trish, my south of the border mosquito" Uh, not a very pleasant metaphoric imagery. Not sure Trish would like this.
"My world without you is one big gas attack" Gross imagery--gross.
Interesting love song. Good luck in the contest.
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"a South of the Border lover
Trish" Mmm, she looks like a nice dsh.
'Trish, you're a real hot burrito!" Still, try not to bite too hard.
"Trish, my south of the border mosquito" Uh, not a very pleasant metaphoric imagery. Not sure Trish would like this.
"My world without you is one big gas attack" Gross imagery--gross.
Interesting love song. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Jim,
Este es una poema muy my bochornoso! I studied Spanish in college.
I love your adjectives and your wonderful feelings for this chica!
Great work, Jim.
C best wishes,
Cindy
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Jim,
Este es una poema muy my bochornoso! I studied Spanish in college.
I love your adjectives and your wonderful feelings for this chica!
Great work, Jim.
C best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
A lot of romance and passion going on in this adorable little poem. I enjoyed reading. I'm curious do you speak Spanish, I guess my real question, are you bilingual? Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.
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A lot of romance and passion going on in this adorable little poem. I enjoyed reading. I'm curious do you speak Spanish, I guess my real question, are you bilingual? Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
