Comment from
papa55mike
All songs and poems are just waiting for the next line to appear or maybe a title to your dreams. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
What a lively and heartfelt song! I really liked how you brought together various images and emotions. It's clear you had fun writing it, and that energy really comes through in the song. Keep on sharing your imaginings they make for truly enjoyable music!!!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024