Think Carefully When You Vote
Elections Matter24 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This loop poem, Think Carefully When You Vote, has the proper formatting and basically reminds the voters that Trump is a liar and a criminal and needs to pay for his many sins.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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This loop poem, Think Carefully When You Vote, has the proper formatting and basically reminds the voters that Trump is a liar and a criminal and needs to pay for his many sins.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Ahh... You read between the lines. I tried not to say it in those exact words.
Beth
Comment from karenina
Great loop poem with the most important advice we all should be heeding between now and November. Love your "be'cause"-- very clever!
I like it when poets think outside the box. I keep hearing people say they are so disheartened they plan on staying home. Good grief...
That is the worst thing to do!
Karenina
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Great loop poem with the most important advice we all should be heeding between now and November. Love your "be'cause"-- very clever!
I like it when poets think outside the box. I keep hearing people say they are so disheartened they plan on staying home. Good grief...
That is the worst thing to do!
Karenina
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Karenina. I'm glad you like this.
Beth
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Thank you, Karenina. I'm glad you like this.
Beth
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever poem with some sound advice here Beth. We need to take voting seriously as it can change our lives and here in Britain everything has changed under a labour Government and not for the better. I enjoyed your plea for vote wisely Beth, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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A clever poem with some sound advice here Beth. We need to take voting seriously as it can change our lives and here in Britain everything has changed under a labour Government and not for the better. I enjoyed your plea for vote wisely Beth, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Dolly. I really appreciate the nice review and your comments.
Beth
Comment from Ric Myworld
Over the last few elections its been hard for me to vote and feel like either of the candidates would be a win, and this one isn't any different. I'm just amazed that out of 400 million people, these two are the best we can get.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Over the last few elections its been hard for me to vote and feel like either of the candidates would be a win, and this one isn't any different. I'm just amazed that out of 400 million people, these two are the best we can get.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank for the review. Watch the debate and toss a coin. We need to vote for the one who might be the least harmful.
Beth
Comment from gansach
This is a great entry for the Loop Poetry competition. You have given it a nice presentation and a timely and important message. I am enjoying reading loop poems, especially when they have a natural flow so the repetitions aren't choppy or too forced. Yours are very smooth and well constructed. Great job!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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This is a great entry for the Loop Poetry competition. You have given it a nice presentation and a timely and important message. I am enjoying reading loop poems, especially when they have a natural flow so the repetitions aren't choppy or too forced. Yours are very smooth and well constructed. Great job!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the review and comments. I'd not a fan of loop poetry but I thought I'd give it a shot.
Beth
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Very wise advise. I met a woman and her dad and they brought up who they were voting for. I will not say who, but their reasons for choosing had no depth or reasoning. Typical of many voters.
Mary
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Very wise advise. I met a woman and her dad and they brought up who they were voting for. I will not say who, but their reasons for choosing had no depth or reasoning. Typical of many voters.
Mary
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you Mary. When I see people on the computer being asked why they are supporting the canadate of their choice they seem convinced they should but no idea why they should.
Comment from Terry Broxson
Yep! It says here, I need a hundred and forty-six more characters to post a response. No, it only took me three letters to agree, and there nothing to suggest it needs improvement, let the number stand for for itself. Terry.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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Yep! It says here, I need a hundred and forty-six more characters to post a response. No, it only took me three letters to agree, and there nothing to suggest it needs improvement, let the number stand for for itself. Terry.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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Thank you Terry. I'm pleased you agree with the poem and feel it worthy of six stars so thank you very much.
Beth
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Thank you Terry. I'm pleased you agree with the poem and feel it worthy of six stars so thank you very much.
Beth
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Beth, this is the best loop poem I've read for this contest. I like the way you bent the rules a little with "be'cause" - I hope the committee sees this as I do, creative.
Good luck in the contest, and let's pray that our nation does the right thing for democracy.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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Beth, this is the best loop poem I've read for this contest. I like the way you bent the rules a little with "be'cause" - I hope the committee sees this as I do, creative.
Good luck in the contest, and let's pray that our nation does the right thing for democracy.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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Thank you Pam. I hope bending the rules a bit is okay. I'm glad you like this. I don't like loop poems that much, but I try to make a little less irritating.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
An excellent last line here, Beth, concluding your thoughtful, well-crafted verse about voting fairly. It's all a huge worry and your post sets the matter out calmly and rationally.
Lies (make)... or maybe Lies portray/define?
This is even better than I first thought as I didn't realise until the end it's a loop poem. Particularly impressive! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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An excellent last line here, Beth, concluding your thoughtful, well-crafted verse about voting fairly. It's all a huge worry and your post sets the matter out calmly and rationally.
Lies (make)... or maybe Lies portray/define?
This is even better than I first thought as I didn't realise until the end it's a loop poem. Particularly impressive! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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Thank you Debbie. I've very pleased you didn't realize it was a loop poem because loop poems tend to irritate me. Thank your for the review.
Beth
Comment from Jacob1395
I'm watching the American election very closely from the UK, I think at the moment it still seems too close to call to see who is going to win it. We just had an election in July which was over and done with within six weeks, it always amazes me how long American elections go on for. A well written piece, Beth. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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I'm watching the American election very closely from the UK, I think at the moment it still seems too close to call to see who is going to win it. We just had an election in July which was over and done with within six weeks, it always amazes me how long American elections go on for. A well written piece, Beth. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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Thank you Jacob. I have no idea why American's allow this painful process to go on so long. I think they way it is don't in others countries make more sense. I don't mean the countries where voting is just a sham like Russia.
