Jane
Strained relationship between father and daughter5 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a horror story in loop style and I wasn't expecting it to end like this, a clever poem for the contest and I wish you luck, this is inventive and unique, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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This is a horror story in loop style and I wasn't expecting it to end like this, a clever poem for the contest and I wish you luck, this is inventive and unique, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much. This was not easy to do but I had fun doing it.
Comment from patcelaw
Sometimes some of the worst relationships have between fathers and daughters fathers don't know the boundary is that they need to keep and they take advantage of a young daughter. I wish you the very best with all of your rising and may you have a wonderful evening. Patricia. O
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Sometimes some of the worst relationships have between fathers and daughters fathers don't know the boundary is that they need to keep and they take advantage of a young daughter. I wish you the very best with all of your rising and may you have a wonderful evening. Patricia. O
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Great job. I found your poem to be powerful and a little unsettling. You explore despair and the consequences of a life marred by addiction and dysfunction so well. I love how you wrote this - you can barely catch your breath reading it which work so well. Very creative and very powerful.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Great job. I found your poem to be powerful and a little unsettling. You explore despair and the consequences of a life marred by addiction and dysfunction so well. I love how you wrote this - you can barely catch your breath reading it which work so well. Very creative and very powerful.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Unsettling I did my job right. Thank you.
Comment from Begin Again
Horror is an understatement...There is tragedy written in every line and the thought of payback - revenge killing and keeping his skull as a constant reminder... Okay, I am officially out of here, LOL
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Horror is an understatement...There is tragedy written in every line and the thought of payback - revenge killing and keeping his skull as a constant reminder... Okay, I am officially out of here, LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from royowen
What a very sad story encased in a loop poem, what a wonderful loop devoted to what appears to be a revenge killing for not having a father devoted to Harry and not the cocaine he was wallowing in, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : she did (slain) slay?
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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What a very sad story encased in a loop poem, what a wonderful loop devoted to what appears to be a revenge killing for not having a father devoted to Harry and not the cocaine he was wallowing in, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : she did (slain) slay?
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Thank you for pointing that out
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