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Comment from Ric Myworld
You've spent a lot of time fine turning your murder skills, and you have chapter after chapter of full proof ideas on how best to get it done. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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You've spent a lot of time fine turning your murder skills, and you have chapter after chapter of full proof ideas on how best to get it done. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Well, I had to re-edit to fit the rules which I had not seen. but folks like the new one better.:-) Karen
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Good, I think I like the new one better too.
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"Quinton" is coming, it is bloody. Karen
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a weird form of poetry. The story it tells is very humorous, and I enjoyed reading it. The artwork is perfect. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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This is a weird form of poetry. The story it tells is very humorous, and I enjoyed reading it. The artwork is perfect. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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I looked for a display of dissolving chemicals, But lye is all I could find. It's as if they don't trust us or something! Thanks for the read, Karen :-)
Comment from Sanku
She is at it again .The murder spree This time she does not even know the person.
A great loop poem the last line made me read it agsin.
I am trying to remember if she has killed any females? LOL
all the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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She is at it again .The murder spree This time she does not even know the person.
A great loop poem the last line made me read it agsin.
I am trying to remember if she has killed any females? LOL
all the best for the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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I thank you for the review. Thing is I missed reading some of the rules. It was supposed to be stanzas of four and, abcb rhyme. So, I had to go back to the drawing board. I hope you like this one too! Thanks again. Karen
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Hi Karen. Very good writing on this loop poem. I'm assuming Fred is not someone you know. If he was, you surely can't stand him. Very good job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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Hi Karen. Very good writing on this loop poem. I'm assuming Fred is not someone you know. If he was, you surely can't stand him. Very good job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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I thank you for the review. Thing is I missed reading some of the rules. It was supposed to be stanzas of four and, abcb rhyme. So, I had to go back to the drawing board. I hope you like this one too! Thanks again. Karen
Comment from Jim Wile
And a good one it was too. It took me a while to catch on that it was a loop poem, and that's the best kind--when it doesn't sound so forced. Now, wherever did you come up with such a ghastly theme for this poem?
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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And a good one it was too. It took me a while to catch on that it was a loop poem, and that's the best kind--when it doesn't sound so forced. Now, wherever did you come up with such a ghastly theme for this poem?
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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I thank you for the review. Thing is I missed reading some of the rules. It was supposed to be stanzas of four and, abcb rhyme. So, I had to go back to the drawing board. I hope you like this one too! I am wicked that's why! Thanks again. Karen
Comment from karenina
I've got to hand it to you...
*** ADDENDUM TO MY REVIEW BELOW: True to Karen's determination, she rewrote the original poem to abide by the rhyme formatting rules and good for her for doing so! I like this one just as much! Maybe better!
You are the ONLY one on site that I know can make murdering (men) somehow humorous and with such imagination. I riffed an idea to you using the correct rhyme format--
But I see from you comments you've decided to let this one fly (and it's great, so I understand!)
Unless the committee is asleep, you won't make it to the judging...meh, that's okay as long as you're happy with it!
Poor Fred, he's anonymous to you NOW!
:)
Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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I've got to hand it to you...
*** ADDENDUM TO MY REVIEW BELOW: True to Karen's determination, she rewrote the original poem to abide by the rhyme formatting rules and good for her for doing so! I like this one just as much! Maybe better!
You are the ONLY one on site that I know can make murdering (men) somehow humorous and with such imagination. I riffed an idea to you using the correct rhyme format--
But I see from you comments you've decided to let this one fly (and it's great, so I understand!)
Unless the committee is asleep, you won't make it to the judging...meh, that's okay as long as you're happy with it!
Poor Fred, he's anonymous to you NOW!
:)
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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I thank you for the review. Thing is I missed reading some of the rules. It was supposed to be stanzas of four and, abcb rhyme. So, I had to go back to the drawing board. I hope you like this one too! You made me do it! Thanks again. Karen
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Great work! (I added an addendum to my review because you rock...)
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Thanks so much. Others like it better too! Maybe because I put in the additional effort:-)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Fred is one unlucky guy if he needs to be dead. I guess lye would work as well as anything to get rid of the body. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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Fred is one unlucky guy if he needs to be dead. I guess lye would work as well as anything to get rid of the body. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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I thank you for the review. Thing is I missed reading some of the rules. It was supposed to be stanzas of four and, abcb rhyme. So, I had to go back to the drawing board. I hope you like this one too! Thanks again. Karen
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I just reread and I like it much better. I think you got this.
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Thank you so much for rereading it. It was tough redoing it. But, Karenia would not let up. Trust another Karen to be Pushy! :-)
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Maybe it goes with the name. LOL
Comment from GoWiSt
"Fred Gets Himself Dead
I Need to Kill Fred" Of course you do; what could be more obvious? Do you ever consider murdering a Francine? Or Fredericka? Or Franchesca? Or are there not bad women out there that sorely need killing?
"Free to his acid wash him" Delete 'his'.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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"Fred Gets Himself Dead
I Need to Kill Fred" Of course you do; what could be more obvious? Do you ever consider murdering a Francine? Or Fredericka? Or Franchesca? Or are there not bad women out there that sorely need killing?
"Free to his acid wash him" Delete 'his'.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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I thank you for the review. It needed more edits than that. Thing is I missed reading some of the rules. It was supposed to be stanzas of four and, abcb rhyme. So, I had to go back to the drawing board. I hope you like this one too! Thanks again. Karen
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
So, you are an assassin and Fred is your "assignment"?
I don't know, Karen. If I were spending a night in your home, I think I'd sleep with one eye open.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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So, you are an assassin and Fred is your "assignment"?
I don't know, Karen. If I were spending a night in your home, I think I'd sleep with one eye open.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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Picky HMMMM? You are female anyhoo. I thank you for the review. Thing is I missed reading some of the rules. It was supposed to be stanzas of four and, abcb rhyme. So, I had to go back to the drawing board. I hope you like this one too! Thanks again. Karen
Comment from T B Botts
Well Karen,
Fred's gone and done it now. What did he do to you- cheat, steal something, use your clothes to cross dress? The dirty scum bag. His last name wasn't Flintstone was it? I hope not. I see that you're going to use lye. I've heard of using lime to cover a body, but not lye. I know it's caustic. Would it dissolve poor Fred? What about the bones. Have you got a big dog? I think I'm glad that we're living so far apart. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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Well Karen,
Fred's gone and done it now. What did he do to you- cheat, steal something, use your clothes to cross dress? The dirty scum bag. His last name wasn't Flintstone was it? I hope not. I see that you're going to use lye. I've heard of using lime to cover a body, but not lye. I know it's caustic. Would it dissolve poor Fred? What about the bones. Have you got a big dog? I think I'm glad that we're living so far apart. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
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I know from Watching " Blacklist" that you need a combination of chemicals, and then a body is turned into soup, and moves effortlessly down the drain. I thank you for the review. Thing is I missed reading some of the rules. It was supposed to be stanzas of four and, abcb rhyme. So, I had to go back to the drawing board. I hope you like this one too! Thanks again. Karen
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I used to like watching The Blacklist. James Spader was the best. I never liked him as an actor until he and William Shatner starred in Boston Legal. We couldn't get enough of him then.