My Friend the Driver
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I could feel the emotion as I read this contest entry. The rhyming scheme is very good and I'm sure it helps make the flow smooth. I want to wish you luck with the contest.
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I could feel the emotion as I read this contest entry. The rhyming scheme is very good and I'm sure it helps make the flow smooth. I want to wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
Comment from patcelaw
It is tragic that you lost a friend and her car race. That is one of the drawbacks of getting out in an automobile and driving fast around the track. There is a possibility that they would lose their lives, but they tend to want to do it because they enjoy the sport. Patricia.
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It is tragic that you lost a friend and her car race. That is one of the drawbacks of getting out in an automobile and driving fast around the track. There is a possibility that they would lose their lives, but they tend to want to do it because they enjoy the sport. Patricia.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was very powerful. Your poem shares an emotional story. It does an excellent job of capturing the high stakes of racing. And the devastation risk of loss. I like that you share the memory of the racecar driver living on even after his passing.
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I thought this was very powerful. Your poem shares an emotional story. It does an excellent job of capturing the high stakes of racing. And the devastation risk of loss. I like that you share the memory of the racecar driver living on even after his passing.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
