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Next Generation.

Wishing and hoping.

2 total reviews 
Comment from BermyBye50
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This is an excellent entry in the Write a Tanka contest. Your words are honest and truthful. Our children are like butterflies entering the world from a chrysalis carrying forth our hopes and dreams.

All the best in the contest,

BB50

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
    Many thanks.
Comment from jessizero
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I think this was a wonderful tanka for the writing prompt. You got the syllable counts right, and I liked your message. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
    Many thank yous.