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Story /Fiction2 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author,
I found your story to be very intriguing. It seems wills cause more trouble than they're worth sometimes.
Your description and pace you unravel your story are excellent.
Great work!
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Author,
I found your story to be very intriguing. It seems wills cause more trouble than they're worth sometimes.
Your description and pace you unravel your story are excellent.
Great work!
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Great review Zanya
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Thank you so much, Zanya!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I loved reading this! The way you've portrayed Earl Dawson's surprise and frustration was excellent. The descriptions of the Manor and Dawson's emotions really drew me into the story. The twist was great. Your writing kept me eagerly "turning the pages".
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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I loved reading this! The way you've portrayed Earl Dawson's surprise and frustration was excellent. The descriptions of the Manor and Dawson's emotions really drew me into the story. The twist was great. Your writing kept me eagerly "turning the pages".
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Superb review - glad you enjoyed reading it. zanya