Forever There!
My thoughts for Nomi28 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is so true, heartfelt, and lovely; a very special gift for Nomi. I can think of no better way to live with the acceptance that someone you love has departed to a place you will sometime also go.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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This is so true, heartfelt, and lovely; a very special gift for Nomi. I can think of no better way to live with the acceptance that someone you love has departed to a place you will sometime also go.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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First of all, I am blown away by how much time and effort you have put into reading my stories. When I looked at my reviews, I see you...one after another. I am thrilled and blessed by all of it. Thank you so much! And a six for this one means more than anything else.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Harry Craft
when the hammer of emptiness lowers its blow, and shockwaves reverberate through our body and mind. This is a great line with a powerful message Carol. I too think we have all been here at least once. So sad, but true. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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when the hammer of emptiness lowers its blow, and shockwaves reverberate through our body and mind. This is a great line with a powerful message Carol. I too think we have all been here at least once. So sad, but true. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Hello, Harry!
I appears you have been overdosing on my short stories... which thrills me of course. I thank you for taking the time to read and enjoy. It's a blessing when something I write strikes a chord with the reader.
Smiles, Carol
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Your short stories are as good as the novel!
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Thank you! You are so kind to me! What a blessing!
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Well, when the writing is good. What can I say?
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is a beautiful work for such a very sad moment in Nomi's life. I am certain he will appreciate these heartfelt words.
This part was so touching:
We know our days are numbered, but selfishly, we are never ready to let go when the time comes. We shamefully ask for one more day, one more minute, a last sweet kiss, and a gentle squeeze of the hand. We hope for another tomorrow.
Prayers for Nomi!
D
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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This is a beautiful work for such a very sad moment in Nomi's life. I am certain he will appreciate these heartfelt words.
This part was so touching:
We know our days are numbered, but selfishly, we are never ready to let go when the time comes. We shamefully ask for one more day, one more minute, a last sweet kiss, and a gentle squeeze of the hand. We hope for another tomorrow.
Prayers for Nomi!
D
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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thank you so much for your kindness and thoughts on my post for Nomi! I don't walk in his shows but have experienced similar pain and we can use all the support we canget during those times of grief. I pray that my words help i some small way.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from gansach
What a beautiful piece you've written for Nomi. I feel he will appreciate your words of comfort and kindness. This is like a warm hug with good advice. You have created something special that will give him hope and comfort every time he reads it. Wonderful job!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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What a beautiful piece you've written for Nomi. I feel he will appreciate your words of comfort and kindness. This is like a warm hug with good advice. You have created something special that will give him hope and comfort every time he reads it. Wonderful job!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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I pray for that! I have not walked in his hsoes but similar ones and know that the path is not an easy one. Hopefully, all the peoms and posts will help him move forward through his grief.
Smiles and hugs,
Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your words are heartfelt, emotional, and caring. You thoroughly understand the loss of loved ones, including a spouse. Words will not take away the pain of loss, but words can console and serve as a reminder that true love never dies, and loving memories live on forever. Your words aree beautiful and comforting.
Nomi, our thoughts, hearts, and prayers are with you.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Your words are heartfelt, emotional, and caring. You thoroughly understand the loss of loved ones, including a spouse. Words will not take away the pain of loss, but words can console and serve as a reminder that true love never dies, and loving memories live on forever. Your words aree beautiful and comforting.
Nomi, our thoughts, hearts, and prayers are with you.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Lorraine. I really wanted to reach out to Nomi because he had messaged me several times, but he hasn't read the story...maybe because it wasn't listed in the book. I hope he does see it. thank you for your kindness and the review.
smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from zanya
Yes grief has such a powerful impact on our fragile human lives - a selection of consoling sentiments and thoughts shared here for Nomi as he faces his new life situation. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Yes grief has such a powerful impact on our fragile human lives - a selection of consoling sentiments and thoughts shared here for Nomi as he faces his new life situation. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you! I pray that even the smallest of my words might give him a moment of peace and strength until he is able to walk alone.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Brenda Strauser
This is a beautiful tribute. It is touching. It is also heartfelt. Very descriptive and well written. The friends at Fanstory have written beautiful poems, Just like this one.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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This is a beautiful tribute. It is touching. It is also heartfelt. Very descriptive and well written. The friends at Fanstory have written beautiful poems, Just like this one.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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A poet I am not so I hope that my story to Nomi will in someway help him as he struggles through his pain and grief. I thank you for reding and for the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from estory
I really liked this one. I thought it was inspiring, nicely imagined and put together with plenty of emotion in the voice and stirring imagery. "In the silence we can hear our heart splitting apart" that really captured the feeling of pain and loss that seems to strike like a heart attack. I thought the imagery was just brilliant. The memorable little moments of life come alive in this piece, the moment of the wife preparing dinner for two, sitting beside him, taking his hand; all poignant, emotional moments seen from this perspective when a life comes to an end and we are left without someone who was always there for us. I felt much the same when my father died. estory
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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I really liked this one. I thought it was inspiring, nicely imagined and put together with plenty of emotion in the voice and stirring imagery. "In the silence we can hear our heart splitting apart" that really captured the feeling of pain and loss that seems to strike like a heart attack. I thought the imagery was just brilliant. The memorable little moments of life come alive in this piece, the moment of the wife preparing dinner for two, sitting beside him, taking his hand; all poignant, emotional moments seen from this perspective when a life comes to an end and we are left without someone who was always there for us. I felt much the same when my father died. estory
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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I'm beyond thrilled with this response to the story for Nomi. If I help him, you, or anyone else in need, I will be happy and emotionally grateful. I am humbled by your review and the stars. Thank you.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
As someone who has felt the pain of losing that special mate, there is nothing that can be said or done to diminish the pain and loss. But your kind and eloquent words show the caring in your heart for Nomi's sorrows.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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As someone who has felt the pain of losing that special mate, there is nothing that can be said or done to diminish the pain and loss. But your kind and eloquent words show the caring in your heart for Nomi's sorrows.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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I hope that as he faces the coming days and the emptiness suddenly over powers him, he will turn to all the poems and stories and find peace and know that others are there for him.
Thank you as always,
Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
This is a heartwarming piece, Carol. It is true none of us are ever prepared for loss and no one ever truly gets over the death of a loved one. I lost my grandparents ten years ago, which isn't quite the same as losing a lifelong partner, but I still feel sad now when I think about them and wish they were still here. An excellent piece.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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This is a heartwarming piece, Carol. It is true none of us are ever prepared for loss and no one ever truly gets over the death of a loved one. I lost my grandparents ten years ago, which isn't quite the same as losing a lifelong partner, but I still feel sad now when I think about them and wish they were still here. An excellent piece.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much, Jacob. You sound like my son...Out of five children, he is the only one who mentions his grandmother on a daily basis and freely gives her credit for why he produces movies.
Smiles, Carol