Comment from Patrick Bernardy

Excellent

Hello!

You did a great job with the prompt! Good luck in the contest!

Words can kill ... if you're doing it right. This review is sponsored by "The Little Workshop of Horrors" Club! Find us on the club page if you are interested in joining!"

Patrick

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024

Thanks. I will take a look. Though I am not great with the horror genre.

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

A scary entry in the required 13 syllables for the writing prompt. Good luck.

"Words can kill ... if you're doing it right."

This review is sponsored by 'The Little Workshop of Horrors' Club! Find us on the club page if you are interested in joining!

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024

Thanks for the feedback. Though I am not great with the horror genre, I will take a look at the club.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This thirteen-syllable poem, Greatest Fear, has the proper syllable count and sends the soul to the worst-case scenario -- death has come and hell as well.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024

Thanks for the read and feedback.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

I hope it's a nightmare because I'd hate to wake and discover this is what was greeting me and I was in hell. Nicely done! Wish you well in the contest.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024

Me too. Thanks for the read and feedback.