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Tick

Buried emotions.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Requirements met but I am missing the Title
What is Tick but a blood sucking insect?
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 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
    It could be, but I was thinking of a bomb, and that word had both meanings. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a scary poem as these faceless kids are heartless and I wonder who their next victim will be? A fine poem for the prompt, love Dolly x x x x x

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
    I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Nicely done! Your poem packs a lot of power in just a few words. The word choices of "faceless" and "heartless" sets such a chilling tone. I thought "beware of the enemy within" was perfect. It reads like a warning note! Great job!

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
    Your outstanding review made my day.