Tick
Buried emotions.3 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Requirements met but I am missing the Title
What is Tick but a blood sucking insect?
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
Requirements met but I am missing the Title
What is Tick but a blood sucking insect?
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Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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It could be, but I was thinking of a bomb, and that word had both meanings. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a scary poem as these faceless kids are heartless and I wonder who their next victim will be? A fine poem for the prompt, love Dolly x x x x x
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
This is a scary poem as these faceless kids are heartless and I wonder who their next victim will be? A fine poem for the prompt, love Dolly x x x x x
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done! Your poem packs a lot of power in just a few words. The word choices of "faceless" and "heartless" sets such a chilling tone. I thought "beware of the enemy within" was perfect. It reads like a warning note! Great job!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
Nicely done! Your poem packs a lot of power in just a few words. The word choices of "faceless" and "heartless" sets such a chilling tone. I thought "beware of the enemy within" was perfect. It reads like a warning note! Great job!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Your outstanding review made my day.