haiku (black and brown rumple)
a haiku6 total reviews
Comment from Sue Smith
Haha. I really love the turn in the last line. It took me completely by surprise. And Caterpillaring is a great word. It instantly brought up an image of the way caterpillars move
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Haha. I really love the turn in the last line. It took me completely by surprise. And Caterpillaring is a great word. It instantly brought up an image of the way caterpillars move
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Sue
Comment from papa55mike
Yes, we call them wooly boogers in the South, and they say if their fur is thick, it will be a hard winter. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Yes, we call them wooly boogers in the South, and they say if their fur is thick, it will be a hard winter. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Mike
Comment from royowen
It certainly seems like it, I like the wording of this haiku entry, the fist two lines seem to to be setting the scene for the caterpillar to turn into a pretty butterfly, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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It certainly seems like it, I like the wording of this haiku entry, the fist two lines seem to to be setting the scene for the caterpillar to turn into a pretty butterfly, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Roy
Comment from jessizero
You did a great job with this pictureless haiku. You got the syllable count right, and I was impressed that you used a five-syllable word for your last line. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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You did a great job with this pictureless haiku. You got the syllable count right, and I was impressed that you used a five-syllable word for your last line. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Jessizero
Comment from RodG
You make it fun to visualize this scene of caterpillar "rumpling" across an oak leaf. Clever new verbal you created--caterpillaring. Young readers will appreciate this haiku. Rod
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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You make it fun to visualize this scene of caterpillar "rumpling" across an oak leaf. Clever new verbal you created--caterpillaring. Young readers will appreciate this haiku. Rod
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Rod
Comment from kahpot
Very well done, your words give the image of the caterpillar as it slides its way along the tree, your choice of font and background colors are excellent, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Very well done, your words give the image of the caterpillar as it slides its way along the tree, your choice of font and background colors are excellent, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you, kahpot