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Yummy Relationship

A fun couple for the sweet of palate

8 total reviews 
Comment from Begin Again
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These limericks are spreading through FanStory like wildfire, and I am enjoying every one of them. Everyone has a different way of looking at things, and they bring a smile and a chuckle to me. Keep sharing!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
    Thank you for your review here, Carol -- much appreciated!
Comment from Nicki.B
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Haha! I really enjoyed this! I'm not sure if it's a Latino touch with the language use, please forgive if I'm wrong. Maybe Spanish, besides its was really fun to read.
Well done!
Nicki

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much for your review, Nicki!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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good competition in the limerick contest. I liked this one about food and fruit and well everything in between. I like the last rhyming line the best and like the image chosen

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Thank you for your review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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An unusual Limerick about cherries and you made me smile with your authentic words, your metre is a bit off, but I enjoyed the sentiment, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Thank you for your honest review!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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What a clever limerick! I love the humor - especially with the final line. The flow of the poem is excellent. This was a a lighthearted and entertaining read! Keep these coming!

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much for your review!
Comment from lancellot
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Ah, it took a moment to realize that last word is two names, the first and the last. Not sure if it requires a space between them or not. So, he married that pretty bambino.

Good on the form and rhymes. I like the lighthearted and sweet nature of the poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Thank you for your review!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This limerick, Yummy Relationship, has the proper formatting and finds a wife for Chino. She arrived with child in hand and a plan for the man's future. ..

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Thank you for your review!
Comment from jessizero
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This limerick was adorable. The "MarasChino" bit was funny. I think "As pretty as Hera" is one syllable too many for the suggested syllable count, but it's not a huge problem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    Yep!! You are so right, Jessi -- So used to the traditional 88668, my brain just went there.... Thank you for that! (All fixed now!)