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Pump It Up

575 Poem

2 total reviews 
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a delightful haiku for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you with all good things. Patricia maybe even a pumpkin.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Thank you, Patricia :)
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Pump It Up, has the proper formatting and definitely involves a pumpkin. I think you have a big expectation of the four words in line two for seven syllables.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    OOPS! Thank you, Bill. I must stop drinking whilst writing!