His Silence
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8 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
The man at the end of the table, not speaking or making eye contact. Ominous! This is another great addition, Jacob, that leaves me wondering if Danielle will have the opportunity to talk to this mysterious character.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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The man at the end of the table, not speaking or making eye contact. Ominous! This is another great addition, Jacob, that leaves me wondering if Danielle will have the opportunity to talk to this mysterious character.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Steve.
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My pleasure, Jacob.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Dinner time at the large house seems more like a dinner at a real restaurant with a fine bottle of wine, as Danielle and Callum get more friendly overtures from everyone except the man who Danielle saw briefly before. There is still a hint of warning in the air from his behavior. Well-written in general.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Dinner time at the large house seems more like a dinner at a real restaurant with a fine bottle of wine, as Danielle and Callum get more friendly overtures from everyone except the man who Danielle saw briefly before. There is still a hint of warning in the air from his behavior. Well-written in general.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This well-written and brings out the sense that something isn't quite right although you never exactly say that. Callum seems able to ignore the things she most notices, so I hope he will notice if she needs him.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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This well-written and brings out the sense that something isn't quite right although you never exactly say that. Callum seems able to ignore the things she most notices, so I hope he will notice if she needs him.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Jacob,
The man seems to have some clues about what's going on that's not so good about the place. The exercises they are doing to reach realization doesn't seem too good, either, especially as it gave Danielle a panic attack.
Creepy about the dress... and the tux and the wine.
Great job of using present tense,
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Hi Jacob,
The man seems to have some clues about what's going on that's not so good about the place. The exercises they are doing to reach realization doesn't seem too good, either, especially as it gave Danielle a panic attack.
Creepy about the dress... and the tux and the wine.
Great job of using present tense,
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you Rhonda, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Will Danielle get a chance to speak with this man? I hope so. He might be the only one willing to tell her truth. I do wish Danielle figures things out before her, or Callum get hurt. I do like this story.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Will Danielle get a chance to speak with this man? I hope so. He might be the only one willing to tell her truth. I do wish Danielle figures things out before her, or Callum get hurt. I do like this story.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A more relaxing occasion as Danielle and Callum's return is toasted with some very welcome wine. I'm still finding Oliver distinctly creepy and clearly with another agenda. Perhaps he had an affair with Danielle's mother (could you remind me of his age?) Also this mystery man is of interest, especially as he doesn't fit in there and seems so uncomfortable. Intriguing! Well done, Jacob! Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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A more relaxing occasion as Danielle and Callum's return is toasted with some very welcome wine. I'm still finding Oliver distinctly creepy and clearly with another agenda. Perhaps he had an affair with Danielle's mother (could you remind me of his age?) Also this mystery man is of interest, especially as he doesn't fit in there and seems so uncomfortable. Intriguing! Well done, Jacob! Debbie
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you Debbie, Oliver is in his fifties. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
That is quite a celebration they are having. It is like the expect them to stay forever. These people seem unusual in so many ways. There is a lony of mystery in you story and it is fun to read.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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That is quite a celebration they are having. It is like the expect them to stay forever. These people seem unusual in so many ways. There is a lony of mystery in you story and it is fun to read.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
Hmmm...another mystery man with secrets. I wonder what's up with him. And why aren't Adam and Oliver drinking? They've got something up their sleeve.
smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Hmmm...another mystery man with secrets. I wonder what's up with him. And why aren't Adam and Oliver drinking? They've got something up their sleeve.
smiles, Carol
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Carol I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.