Dandelion Dance
One breath, and they create a wondrous spectacle...6 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello. Well done on selecting six words that are meaningful and that resonate with the reader. I like your use of the word 'halycyon'. Great job with this verse. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Melissa
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Hello. Well done on selecting six words that are meaningful and that resonate with the reader. I like your use of the word 'halycyon'. Great job with this verse. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Melissa
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much for your comments!
Comment from NanaGaye
Yes they are mesmerizing. To me you have written a Haiku and stuck to the six words required for the contest, it's worked really well and a great choice if picture good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Yes they are mesmerizing. To me you have written a Haiku and stuck to the six words required for the contest, it's worked really well and a great choice if picture good luck in the contest
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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OMG! Thank you so very much for your comments and, especially for those wonderful stars! May you have a great week ahead!
Comment from Julie Helms
Ahh, another facet of the wonders of creation! Little, perfectly formed, parachuting seeds that ride the wind. Your brief poem encapsulates the wondrous feat, and I love your finish...mesmerizing. Perfect!
Julie
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Ahh, another facet of the wonders of creation! Little, perfectly formed, parachuting seeds that ride the wind. Your brief poem encapsulates the wondrous feat, and I love your finish...mesmerizing. Perfect!
Julie
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much for your comments!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is such a beautiful poem! You had only six words but you made the most of them! You captures a peaceful flight perfectly. The lack of words really lets the imagery shine. And "mesmerizing" feels like the perfect ending. Such a lovely moment captured in just a few words!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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This is such a beautiful poem! You had only six words but you made the most of them! You captures a peaceful flight perfectly. The lack of words really lets the imagery shine. And "mesmerizing" feels like the perfect ending. Such a lovely moment captured in just a few words!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments!
Comment from Ellen Frank Bayer
dandelions are a childhood favorite. halcyon breath: interesting word choice, googled "halcyon" and found out it is the name of a cancer treatment, very different from definition 1, meaning joy.
Good job, loved the image.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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dandelions are a childhood favorite. halcyon breath: interesting word choice, googled "halcyon" and found out it is the name of a cancer treatment, very different from definition 1, meaning joy.
Good job, loved the image.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much for your comments!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oooh! What a perfect and artistic description of making a wish on a white dandelion! You captured the experience perfectly with your words then capped it off with the perfect picture of the act. Good luck to you in the Six-Word Poetry Contest!! xoxox
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Oooh! What a perfect and artistic description of making a wish on a white dandelion! You captured the experience perfectly with your words then capped it off with the perfect picture of the act. Good luck to you in the Six-Word Poetry Contest!! xoxox
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much for your comments!! :-) :-)