Deliscioso!
Oh, the wonderful dish that is Autumn...9 total reviews
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Nice job Yvette!
You won the ribbon and cast a 5-7-5. The poem certainly is a complete description of what autumn delivers. The last line is not just text, meeting a requirement, it actually completes the poem.
Congratulations. When I left 3 years ago, I was a fan. When I came back 2 weeks ago, my fan files have changed, so I had to do it over again.
Robert
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Nice job Yvette!
You won the ribbon and cast a 5-7-5. The poem certainly is a complete description of what autumn delivers. The last line is not just text, meeting a requirement, it actually completes the poem.
Congratulations. When I left 3 years ago, I was a fan. When I came back 2 weeks ago, my fan files have changed, so I had to do it over again.
Robert
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one as well! Have a Fabulous Friday out there, Sir Zimm! :-) :-)
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Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Deliscioso!, has the proper formatting and prepares a serving of autumn that is both well-cooled and colorful to see displayed before you.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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This 5-7-5, Deliscioso!, has the proper formatting and prepares a serving of autumn that is both well-cooled and colorful to see displayed before you.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thanx so much for your review on this one, Sir Bill -- always great to read you (and see that funny little critter!!)! :-) Yvette
Comment from tempeste
Ciao !
The artwork choice is stunning and the second line of your poem stood out for me.
It's original and sounds poetic to the ear.
The first line is fine but it lacks the uniqueness of the second line.
PS: I was wondering in what language is your title ?
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Ciao !
The artwork choice is stunning and the second line of your poem stood out for me.
It's original and sounds poetic to the ear.
The first line is fine but it lacks the uniqueness of the second line.
PS: I was wondering in what language is your title ?
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your review, tempeste. And it is Spanish... :-)
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Ciao!
First off congratulations on your red ribbon win !
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You have a tiny typo in the title then :
delicioso (M)
deliciosa. ( F )
If Autumn in Spanish is male then delicioso 😐
Keep safe ! 🍀
Comment from Iza Deleanu
wow, Yvonne I love the background and is mesmerizing: "ower light and temps
Stir with breeze and scarlet zest
Recipe for Fall" thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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wow, Yvonne I love the background and is mesmerizing: "ower light and temps
Stir with breeze and scarlet zest
Recipe for Fall" thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
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Oh, Iza! Thank you so much for these wonderful stars, my lady -- so glad you enjoyed this! Here's wishing you a wonderful upcoming weekend! ;) Yvette
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You are so welcome:) I wish you a wonderful week end
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you are so welcome
Comment from patcelaw
This is a lovely recipe for fall and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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This is a lovely recipe for fall and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your thoughtful review!!
Comment from Begin Again
It sounds like a delicious recipe for fall, too! I love all the flavors of colors and the crisp air...I wish it didn't throw a party for winter to come marching in. Well done!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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It sounds like a delicious recipe for fall, too! I love all the flavors of colors and the crisp air...I wish it didn't throw a party for winter to come marching in. Well done!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your thoughtful review!!
Comment from zanya
It's a great title to engage the reader leading into a 5/7/5 well portrayed with appropriate language for an autumn recipe - great achievement - should make it to the winner's enclosure!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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It's a great title to engage the reader leading into a 5/7/5 well portrayed with appropriate language for an autumn recipe - great achievement - should make it to the winner's enclosure!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Oh my goodness, thank you so much for those wonderful stars!! Just made my day... here's hoping you have a wonderful day as well out there!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You described and ambient scene here where low light and cool breezes can change the atmospheric, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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You described and ambient scene here where low light and cool breezes can change the atmospheric, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your thoughtful review!!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love how this feels like a snapshot of fall! The way you bring the season to life with just a few words is wonderful. I likw how you made it a recipe. Well done!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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I love how this feels like a snapshot of fall! The way you bring the season to life with just a few words is wonderful. I likw how you made it a recipe. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your thoughtful review!!