Autumn Recital
A 3-5-3 contest entry10 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Rod,
Nicely written with your companion illustration. Do like how you explained the motion in your contest entry. As our Autumn progresses, that scene will be repeated often.
Congrats on your silver medal accolade for this presentation.
Mark
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Rod,
Nicely written with your companion illustration. Do like how you explained the motion in your contest entry. As our Autumn progresses, that scene will be repeated often.
Congrats on your silver medal accolade for this presentation.
Mark
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Hi, Mark. I am delighted you enjoyed this shortie. Many thanks for your review. Rod
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Autumn Recital, has the proper formatting and seems to bring in the backup sounds to the slow and steady dismantling of the summer that was just here.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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This 3-5-3, Autumn Recital, has the proper formatting and seems to bring in the backup sounds to the slow and steady dismantling of the summer that was just here.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your brought the breeze and the autumnal scene with the leaves blowing about with the sounds of whistling wind here, I enjoyed this all to familiar scene outside my window just now, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Your brought the breeze and the autumnal scene with the leaves blowing about with the sounds of whistling wind here, I enjoyed this all to familiar scene outside my window just now, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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So pleased Icould bring this scene to life for you,Dolly. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
I gave my vote to Hurricane Winds ( sigh) but I'm going to give this entry a sixer.
I love , love autumn and you have captured its magic.
The art choice is mesmerising and showcases well your delightful poem !
I like the title too :
a RECITAL it is indeed !
leaves entertain those that are attuned to the beauty of Mother Nature, dancing in twirls and rustling.
And to think, some folks just see dead leaves. ( big sigh)
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Ciao!
I gave my vote to Hurricane Winds ( sigh) but I'm going to give this entry a sixer.
I love , love autumn and you have captured its magic.
The art choice is mesmerising and showcases well your delightful poem !
I like the title too :
a RECITAL it is indeed !
leaves entertain those that are attuned to the beauty of Mother Nature, dancing in twirls and rustling.
And to think, some folks just see dead leaves. ( big sigh)
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Autumn is perhaps the grandest season to experience. I truly appreciate your wonderful praise, tempeste, and your generous gift of stars. Thank you very much.
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent image and the thought of air with wind instruments is pleasing, and it links with the air causing the leaves to whirl, teirl and dance. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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An excellent image and the thought of air with wind instruments is pleasing, and it links with the air causing the leaves to whirl, teirl and dance. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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So pleased you enjoyed this Autumn scene, Wendy. Thank you for your kind praise.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, what an awesome capturing of those fun little whirlwinds that make their way through the leaves! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Oh, what an awesome capturing of those fun little whirlwinds that make their way through the leaves! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for those accolades for my shortie.
Comment from Begin Again
When the leaves are tossed around by the gusts of wind during autumn, they remind me of people dancing a waltz, gracefully gliding here and there. This poem is beautifully written and teases the imagination.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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When the leaves are tossed around by the gusts of wind during autumn, they remind me of people dancing a waltz, gracefully gliding here and there. This poem is beautifully written and teases the imagination.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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So pleased I could tease your imagination, Carol. Many thanks for sharing and praising my shortie.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 3-5-3 'Air' poem writing prompt. A nice poem describing perfectly the twirling nature of fallen leaves in the wind. Nicely done in few words.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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An excellent entry for the 3-5-3 'Air' poem writing prompt. A nice poem describing perfectly the twirling nature of fallen leaves in the wind. Nicely done in few words.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Marilyn, for all that applause for my shortie.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem beautifully shares the dance of nature. The way you describe the wind and leaves as "in tune" work so well. I like how your words share a sense of playfulness. It was easy to visualize this moment. I thought your poem was a lovely reminder of the beauty in the little things!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Your poem beautifully shares the dance of nature. The way you describe the wind and leaves as "in tune" work so well. I like how your words share a sense of playfulness. It was easy to visualize this moment. I thought your poem was a lovely reminder of the beauty in the little things!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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What a dandy review, Michael. Your applause really is encouraging. Thank you!
Comment from Cullen T. Bridges
As my two favorite seasons arrive, it's only right that such a fine poem exists to complement them. Short and yet, the imagery is clear and homely. Lovely work!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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As my two favorite seasons arrive, it's only right that such a fine poem exists to complement them. Short and yet, the imagery is clear and homely. Lovely work!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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I truly appreciate the accolades, Cullen. Thank you!