Free & Breezy
353 Poem3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
These words could be said of the wind or about your soul. The artwork shows the first meaning.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Hi
These words could be said of the wind or about your soul. The artwork shows the first meaning.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Joan.
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You are most welcome.
Joan
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 3-5-3 'Air' poem writing prompt. A poem about the one thing we can never do without in any regard. Oxygen or Air. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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An excellent entry for the 3-5-3 'Air' poem writing prompt. A poem about the one thing we can never do without in any regard. Oxygen or Air. Nicely done.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A good vision for the short form contest here... would suggest removing the periods they are more of a distraction in these extremely short forms - especially at the end as such is obviously the final line of the 3-5-3 and, therefore, the end. Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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A good vision for the short form contest here... would suggest removing the periods they are more of a distraction in these extremely short forms - especially at the end as such is obviously the final line of the 3-5-3 and, therefore, the end. Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Yes, thank you. I wondered about the punctuation. I think you're right.