Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi
This is a good use of few words to give a strong image of morning mist.
The artwork matches well with the theme of the poem.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great weekend.
Joan

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024

I appreciate your review. Your rating indicates there is room for improvement in this writing. I would love to hear any suggestions you might have in that regard. Thank you.

reply by dragonpoet on 18-Oct-2024

My pleasure. The rating was just my fat fingers hitting the wrong number. I updated the rating for you
Joan

reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024

Thank you.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A beautifully presented post full of atmosphere and mystery. I enjoyed reading your delightful rhyming 3-5-3 verse which fits the prompt perfectly. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024

Thank you for your review. I appreciate your complimentary comments and good luck wish.

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the 3-5-3 'Air' poem writing prompt. I like your 3 chosen words and how you wove them into a poem. The picture you chose adds a lot to the presentation.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

Thank you very much. I appreciate your review and kind words.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A wonderful pairing of poetic imagery and chosen pic here -- gives the reader a real feeling of 'place'... :) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my little poem. I appreciate your kind words and best wishes.