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Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "End of the Road "Two very real women in not so real situation.
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Comment from Jim Wile
That was a very nice gesture on your part, Gretchen, to stop Rachelle from kicking Jane to the curb. Very magnanimous of you. And her reaction is about what you would expect from this classless, self-centered, clueless, ex-porn star. Very wise to try to distance yourself from her at the convention. Something tells me you two will regret the decision to let her tag along!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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That was a very nice gesture on your part, Gretchen, to stop Rachelle from kicking Jane to the curb. Very magnanimous of you. And her reaction is about what you would expect from this classless, self-centered, clueless, ex-porn star. Very wise to try to distance yourself from her at the convention. Something tells me you two will regret the decision to let her tag along!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you for this fun and kind review. I think you're onto something with us regretting the decision to let her ride with us. Gretchen
Comment from judiverse
Delightful chapter. I'm thoroughly enjoying this road trip by you and Rachelle. I'm glad got there in one piece, including Jane. Looks like she may have to make arrangements for getting home on her own. Did Jane really think the bellboy was speaking to her? Funny. I love Rachelle's comment about having an ejection seat put in her next car. I like that you referred to Rebekah again. She was such an important figure in the story. Looking forward to the convention! judi
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Delightful chapter. I'm thoroughly enjoying this road trip by you and Rachelle. I'm glad got there in one piece, including Jane. Looks like she may have to make arrangements for getting home on her own. Did Jane really think the bellboy was speaking to her? Funny. I love Rachelle's comment about having an ejection seat put in her next car. I like that you referred to Rebekah again. She was such an important figure in the story. Looking forward to the convention! judi
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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I've been told you will be attending the convention. Lol. thank you so much for this nice review. Gretchen
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You're very welcome. If I'm going, I'd better start packing! I'd love to attend. judi
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
oh man, I thought we got rid of Jane last chapter but she hung on! LOL Well, she does add plenty of novelty to the story so she can stay awhile longer lol Keep 'em coming!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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oh man, I thought we got rid of Jane last chapter but she hung on! LOL Well, she does add plenty of novelty to the story so she can stay awhile longer lol Keep 'em coming!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for this fun review. Gretchen
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for confirming my guess about the "antique rack". Lol.
Enjoyed your view of this end of the road chapter for Janie. I think Gretchen is quite compassionate and very human to want to get revenge. I know nothing about Atlantic City. Wasn't some beauty pageant held there?
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Thanks for confirming my guess about the "antique rack". Lol.
Enjoyed your view of this end of the road chapter for Janie. I think Gretchen is quite compassionate and very human to want to get revenge. I know nothing about Atlantic City. Wasn't some beauty pageant held there?
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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I think the Miss USA pagent was held there. I've never been and don't really have any desire to visit. Thank you for the nice review. Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Gretchen,
her antique rack? I got it immediately. I guess it's a guy thing. You do have a way with words gal. You and Rachelle both mentioned a window partition between the front and back seats. I thought those were only in limos. Guess I'm wrong. Sometimes dog poop on the lawn isn't avoided, it's just not seen and gets tracked into the house. This has been quite the ride with you ladies. I assume it's not done yet, but getting close. You're both to be applauded for an outstanding story. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Hello Gretchen,
her antique rack? I got it immediately. I guess it's a guy thing. You do have a way with words gal. You and Rachelle both mentioned a window partition between the front and back seats. I thought those were only in limos. Guess I'm wrong. Sometimes dog poop on the lawn isn't avoided, it's just not seen and gets tracked into the house. This has been quite the ride with you ladies. I assume it's not done yet, but getting close. You're both to be applauded for an outstanding story. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Tom. I am having fun with this story. I can let my hair down and not worry about offending anyone. No one has any patience for Jane. We are wrapping up the story so just a few more chapters. Thank you so much for this wonderful review and the exceptional rating. Gretchen
Comment from Neonewman
"The Sea Air is laced with diesel and expensive cologne." What a powerful piece of description, Gretchen. I could actually smell it, lol. I don't know how anyone could stand being around some one like Jane. I deal with some at work, but not on this level. I can't wait to see what happens at the convention.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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"The Sea Air is laced with diesel and expensive cologne." What a powerful piece of description, Gretchen. I could actually smell it, lol. I don't know how anyone could stand being around some one like Jane. I deal with some at work, but not on this level. I can't wait to see what happens at the convention.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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You are coming to the convention, aren't you? lol. Thank you for this great review. Gretchen
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Maybe when I retire, lol. My pleasure, Gretchen.
Comment from patcelaw
I very much enjoyed listening to this chapter and I wish you the very best along with your coat. Writer presented this book in a wonderful way. May you have a blessed week and may God give you all of your desires. Patricia
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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I very much enjoyed listening to this chapter and I wish you the very best along with your coat. Writer presented this book in a wonderful way. May you have a blessed week and may God give you all of your desires. Patricia
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much, Patricia. I appreciate this kind review. Gretchen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hahaha... I love your good humor. I love the seashore and it's sad that Atlanta city's beaches smell so bad. What a waste.
Excellent chapter. I'm looking forward to the fanstory convention.
Well done!
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Hahaha... I love your good humor. I love the seashore and it's sad that Atlanta city's beaches smell so bad. What a waste.
Excellent chapter. I'm looking forward to the fanstory convention.
Well done!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much, Gypsy. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I couldn't help but smile and giggle as I read this addition. You did a great job writing this section. I really like this story and can't wait to read more. I do hope Jane finds others to harass.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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I couldn't help but smile and giggle as I read this addition. You did a great job writing this section. I really like this story and can't wait to read more. I do hope Jane finds others to harass.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Who knows, Barbara, she may meet up with you at the convention. Lol. Rachelle and I plan on running into a few members of Fanstory at the convention. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from pome lover
Gretchen, you are so funny. One minute you sound so sweet and shiny, the next, welcome to the real world. I'm afraid I'm with Rachelle. I don't see how ya'll have stood her this long. I say I'm with RAchelle, but I don't have the ability to say to Jane what she said, however I was cheering her on. And you came through at the end like a champ. That was a good one! I know you're thrilled that I think so. :)
Great chapter.
Am really curious to see where it goes from here. What a challenge. Looking forward to it,
Katharine
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Gretchen, you are so funny. One minute you sound so sweet and shiny, the next, welcome to the real world. I'm afraid I'm with Rachelle. I don't see how ya'll have stood her this long. I say I'm with RAchelle, but I don't have the ability to say to Jane what she said, however I was cheering her on. And you came through at the end like a champ. That was a good one! I know you're thrilled that I think so. :)
Great chapter.
Am really curious to see where it goes from here. What a challenge. Looking forward to it,
Katharine
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Always love your reviews. I'm glad you enjoyed this. As far as my personality goes, I'm nice until I'm not. Lol. Gretchen
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yeah.me, too.