Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

May we all "cast our lots with faith's bright light," and know that Joy comes with the morning and His faithfulness is renewed to us each day just as He always loves and daily bears our burdens.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024

Comment from LateBloomer

Exceptional

Hi Roy, this is a poem written from the heart. So many of us try and try and fail and fail, but as long as we keep trying, there is hope.

Of note:
For life is full of pain and fears,
but winds will change and dry those tears.

(The above is so true. Winds change indeed. Nothing lasts forever.)

Soulful writing. Silky rhyming. A pleasure to read. Margaret

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024

Thanks Margaret for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

An honest and realistic account of every-day life with its emotional and physical ups and downs. Well done, (apart from a few punctuation errors to edit).
Wendy

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

With our faith in God, He'll make take care of us. He only wants what's best for us. Thank you for sharing is poem with us.

but winds will change and dry those.tears. (you don't need period after those, but do need a space)

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024

Thanks Barbara, for these great comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

Christ underwent all sorts of torture and death for us, so it should not seem unreasonable that we sometimes hurt or despair as well. But Christ has given us the victory not to remain in torment, but to once again be led to Victory.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024

Thanks Jim, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

An encouraging poem in steady iambic tetrameter, structured perfectly. We all experience the doldrums now and then, but thankfully God intervenes and sends the winds to change our course. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024

Thanks Carol for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

A very encouraging poem for those experiencing despair. God is going to show up and dispel the darkness and bring hope. There are so many who need this message, my friend. Please never give up sharing your faith and gift with us. Some of us have trouble keeping up with 2 posts a day, but that doesn't mean the ones we can get to don't mean anything to us.

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024

Thanks Rhonda, for these terrific comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

We have that hope that God will come to our rescue in rough times. Your words are well said and very expressive of your intended theme. This presentation is beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
RJ

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024

Thanks RJ, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Thank you for this, my brother. A much needed poem for me personally. Always beautifully written and always timely and spiritual.
Sending you and yours my very best today as always.
Sal Xoxo's

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024

Thanks Sally, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from Nicki.B

Excellent

This poem is just beautiful Roy. It is a true reminder that although we can fail at some stages in our lives, we have to pick ourselves right back up again with the help of God. Well done
Best Wishes
Nicki

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024

Thanks Nicki, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy