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The Queen

Battle of the Sprites

2 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Wow... harsh one there. Did one of them do something to you in the past that you hold a bit of a grudge....? A well-presented offering for a prose contest with a serious word limit... Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the competition! ;)

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
    Thank you for the great review, Yvette. Lol. I was just being ridiculous with the contest. I had a whole lot more I wanted to add but couldn't pull it off with the word count limit so this dumb piece is what they get. Haha. I appreciate the good luck wishes and stop in, Y.
Comment from papa55mike
Excellent
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He needs to leave that Vodka alone if it makes him see little people flying around him. What a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
    Thank you for the great review, Mike. Lol. Yeah, he needs to let up on his intake, that's for sure. I appreciate the stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silliness.