We Need to Believe
It is important3 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
This will be an interesting entry in the My Faith Poetry contest. The quote by Roy T. Bennett was a good way to set the groundwork for your poem.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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This will be an interesting entry in the My Faith Poetry contest. The quote by Roy T. Bennett was a good way to set the groundwork for your poem.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A lovely profession and direction of faith for the contest here! ;) I would only suggest somehow rephrasing that third line of your third stanza as it throws the rhythm you've established throughout the rest of your poem... Your Christian heart truly shines through in your messaging! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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A lovely profession and direction of faith for the contest here! ;) I would only suggest somehow rephrasing that third line of your third stanza as it throws the rhythm you've established throughout the rest of your poem... Your Christian heart truly shines through in your messaging! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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The poem is better than good!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
an excellent entry for the My Faith poetry contest. Good flow to this poem and nice rhyme. It isn't always easy to believe in ourselves but it is necessary because we can't rely on others to believe in us if we can't believe in ourselves. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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an excellent entry for the My Faith poetry contest. Good flow to this poem and nice rhyme. It isn't always easy to believe in ourselves but it is necessary because we can't rely on others to believe in us if we can't believe in ourselves. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thanks