Alms* of Autumn
Accepting Nature's blessings of Fall . . .5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3 suite, Alms of August, has the proper formatting and sees many sights as gestures from nature to better the existence of the next creature of growing thing below. Nice.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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This 3-5-3 suite, Alms of August, has the proper formatting and sees many sights as gestures from nature to better the existence of the next creature of growing thing below. Nice.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your review!
Comment from Tim Margetts
Very nice.
Haiku is a passion of mine, I love the way so much can be said in so few words.
This captures the essence of the season very nicely in such an understated way.
I now understand the way the review system works on here and have adjusted my score accordingly
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Very nice.
Haiku is a passion of mine, I love the way so much can be said in so few words.
This captures the essence of the season very nicely in such an understated way.
I now understand the way the review system works on here and have adjusted my score accordingly
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Your rating of four stars, by definition here on the site, indicates that adjustments need to be made in the poem or prose offering... yet you offer only positive feedback here. Could you please note why you rated that adjustments are needed and what those adjustments would be? Thank you!
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Ahh OK then my apologies.
I enjoyed the poem but I guess I am used to a 5-star system. So, I felt 4 was a good reflection.
I don't know if I can correct the score but if not consider it a 5
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The photograph is magical, and your appreciation of Autumn's gifts is evident in your ambient words here, a fine presentation and I enjoyed the sentiment of exhaustion as the following season allows everything rest and recuperate, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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The photograph is magical, and your appreciation of Autumn's gifts is evident in your ambient words here, a fine presentation and I enjoyed the sentiment of exhaustion as the following season allows everything rest and recuperate, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much for your time and your encouraging comments!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Write a 3-5-3 Fall Rerelated Haiku writing prompt. I enjoyed the third line repeat and the bits of alliteration throughout. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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An excellent entry for the Write a 3-5-3 Fall Rerelated Haiku writing prompt. I enjoyed the third line repeat and the bits of alliteration throughout. Nicely done.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is beautiful! The gentle shift through seasons feels kinda comforting!I can feel the cooling air and the shadows stretching. Wonderful work!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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This is beautiful! The gentle shift through seasons feels kinda comforting!I can feel the cooling air and the shadows stretching. Wonderful work!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review!