Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

What a lovely poem! I adore how you capture the warmth in everyday moments. For me this is a beautiful reminder of the simple joys in life.
Your repetition of "warm our hearts" ties it all together perfectly. Keep sharing your wonderful work; it truly brightens the day!

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

It's nice to see you are back reviewing.

Your kind feedback always encourages me to write more despite the many zero votes received in the booth.

I'm a simple lass and I don't need much to feel happy:

simple, genuine foods, enjoy Nature in her autumn dress, my pets nosediving in piles of autumn leaves

Keep safe!

Comment from Kahlani

Good

A very warm hearted poem times three. Beautifully presented with vibrant colours. My only suggestion would be to change it up at the end of each haiku as they are the same. Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

The same ending for all three stanzas was a requirement in this autumn contest.

I'm glad you enjoyed the presentation.

Thank you and keep safe!

reply by Kahlani on 27-Oct-2024

Oh, I didn't realize. Thank you for the clarification.

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

You are welcome ! 🖖