Midnight on Clear Lake
A light show to rival Broadway...9 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Hi, Yvonne.
I miss our PA fireflies. They used to shine brightly in our woods, but the Gypsy moth debacle a few years ago had them eradicated.
Your beautiful poem reminds me of these beautiful free spirits.
Great poem, Yvonne.
Best wishes,
Cindy
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Hi, Yvonne.
I miss our PA fireflies. They used to shine brightly in our woods, but the Gypsy moth debacle a few years ago had them eradicated.
Your beautiful poem reminds me of these beautiful free spirits.
Great poem, Yvonne.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hey Yvette.
This picture is awesome. Your 5-7-5 is well written and the descriptors draw good verbal visions. I tried to write one once and I shredded the page when it was finished.
Z :~))
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Hey Yvette.
This picture is awesome. Your 5-7-5 is well written and the descriptors draw good verbal visions. I tried to write one once and I shredded the page when it was finished.
Z :~))
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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I find that the 5-7-5 is good for when life is busy... then it makes for a good practice of the imagery in but a few words (yeah, sorry, the teacher in me can't resist the 'practice' thing -- lol!!) ;) Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Z -- it's taking some time to 'get back into the swing' after my 'absence', but I'm getting there! ;) Yvette
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You're welcome, Yvette.
Z
Comment from Mark D. R.
Congrats on your podium placement Yvette!
Your last line was a perfect ending to your poem - really exquisite phrasing. 'Moonlight ripples' gets second place.
I also like your artwork and coloring scheme for this entry.
Mark
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Congrats on your podium placement Yvette!
Your last line was a perfect ending to your poem - really exquisite phrasing. 'Moonlight ripples' gets second place.
I also like your artwork and coloring scheme for this entry.
Mark
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thanx so much for the wonderful review here, sir -- means a lot coming from you!! ;) You take care out there and enjoy the weekend!! ;) Yvette
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a good metaphoric poem about the beauty of the fireflies.
Is is amazing how many there are and how bright there lights are.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of the day and week.
Joan.
P S If you don't know, I have just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". I have provide a link to find it on Amazon.com at the end of my profile.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Hi
This is a good metaphoric poem about the beauty of the fireflies.
Is is amazing how many there are and how bright there lights are.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of the day and week.
Joan.
P S If you don't know, I have just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". I have provide a link to find it on Amazon.com at the end of my profile.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your time and your review!
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You're welcome on both counts.
Joan
Comment from Tim Margetts
Love this.
Thank you for bringing this vision of firefly lights over a moonlit lake to my eyes and inner vision.
Well crafted and beautifully written.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Love this.
Thank you for bringing this vision of firefly lights over a moonlit lake to my eyes and inner vision.
Well crafted and beautifully written.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your time and your review!
Comment from mermaids
Oh I just love fireflies and your last line "firefly cotillion" brings forth a beautiful image. Excellent 5-7-5 form that takes the reader to another place, one of nature and a feel of fantasy. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Oh I just love fireflies and your last line "firefly cotillion" brings forth a beautiful image. Excellent 5-7-5 form that takes the reader to another place, one of nature and a feel of fantasy. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your time and your review!
Comment from Sally Law
Every now and then, a 5-7-5 gets my attention because it's unique and beautiful. A winner here in my eyes, mystery poet. I'll be watching for this in the voting booth. Sending you my best today as always, and my good wishes for the contest.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Every now and then, a 5-7-5 gets my attention because it's unique and beautiful. A winner here in my eyes, mystery poet. I'll be watching for this in the voting booth. Sending you my best today as always, and my good wishes for the contest.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your time and your review!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Hi,
What a lovely poem. It's short, but has a powerful message. The picture sets the scene for the poem. It's almost like you are there. What is a 5-7-5 poem and how hard are they. Keep the poems coming. Look forward to reading more.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Hi,
What a lovely poem. It's short, but has a powerful message. The picture sets the scene for the poem. It's almost like you are there. What is a 5-7-5 poem and how hard are they. Keep the poems coming. Look forward to reading more.
Cecilia
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much for your review!
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You're welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your dancing flair in this unique post and I have to admit I had to look up the word cotillion as I have never heard of it before, but it all makes sense now, those moving reflections of fireflies are like dancing light bulbs, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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I enjoyed your dancing flair in this unique post and I have to admit I had to look up the word cotillion as I have never heard of it before, but it all makes sense now, those moving reflections of fireflies are like dancing light bulbs, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your thoughtful review!