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Archie, The Tennis Player

A poem about this skeleton I saw in a car

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Comment from ESOSTINE
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Hello, Brenda, you did justice to this photo. I would be scared to my marrow seeing this skeleton on a lonely road playing tennis. Hahaha! Well done, dear, and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    Thank you for the very nice review. When I got in my car, I look over to my left side and see this. At first, it scared me to death.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Hahahahaha! That had to be quite the sight for you! Hilarious. You're spot-on, though, about what Archie is saying as you snap his photo: he's a good guy - just wants to place a little tennis - don't be scared.

What a fun entry this is! I hope it does really well for you in the contest.
xoxox

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    I had just got in my car, and I look over to the left and see this. It scared me to death. Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Brenda.
Archie looks like he could use something to eat. That's an unusual, yet interesting picture that you came upon. I looked closely at the picture and I think the ball Archie is holding is a pickleball. I have only seen pickleball on TV for three minutes, but they use a yellow plastic wiffle ball style. Either way, I think you've got him pegged.

Robert

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    I know it isn't a tennis ball, but close enough and the owner plays tennis. Thank you for the review.
Comment from Shanbreen
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Brenda, I think Archie is ready to play ball. This is a well-written photo poetry, where you have a wonderful visual to go with poem. I love "People are different why can't skeletons be?" Thanks for sharing and best for the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    Thank you for your great review. I thought people need something a little funny right now.
Comment from DonandVicki
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Nothing quite like a naked (Almost naked) skeleton next to you on Halloween. I agree with Archie, I am sick to Death ,sic, with Halloween. A cute picture poem.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    Thank you for the very nice review. I'm glad it is over.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Does this help her with the 2 people or more fast lane?
I am not on the highway very much at all. This is an interesting Halloween offering. Did you get many trick or treaters? I slept through it, if I had any. I sleep at the oddest times. Karen

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
    This skeleton was in a car sitting next time me at a park. I thought I'd put a different twist on it. Thank you for the review.
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 01-Nov-2024
    :-)
Comment from Wendy G
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Lol. This is a very humorous and fun one, and the owner obviously had a good sense of humour. I enjoyed your poem, so best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Yes, the owner let me take a picture. Thank you Wendy for your great review.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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I love this picture and the fun you've built around him, Archie. We have a skeleton, a gift to my daughter years ago. At the moment he has his Scotsman's hat on, but soon he will we in his Santa hat. Good one, Brenda for this challenge. Well done,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from royowen
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Isn't that delightful, I've never been fortunate enough to have seen a Skelton in another's can, what a wonderful happening Brenda, well done, great post, and a righteous skeleton, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Thank you for your great review.
reply by royowen on 01-Nov-2024
    Most welcome
reply by royowen on 01-Nov-2024
    Most welcome
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Well, it is different in a pleasant way. I am with Archie on this one. I never was big on Halloween. One time I was grazed by splinters when the bottle in my hand was shattered a bullet during a Halloween prank. Your post is funny and shows tge lighter side of things.
RJ


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 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Thank you RJ for your very nice review. I don't like Halloween either.
reply by RJ Heritage on 31-Oct-2024
    You're welcome
    RJ