Comment from Dr. Nad

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Well Debi here I am late on Saturday night one more time I need to stop in and check out some FanStory submissions. I checked out this one and I give it a six star rating thanks for sharing all that you do!

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

Thanks so much, my triplet brother for these awesome comments and six stars from you. Your are so sweet. Thanks again!! Stop sometime when you stay a little longer. LOL... love ya, Debi

reply by Dr. Nad on 18-Nov-2024

You're very very welcome and believe it or not this is not a cut and paste. Lol

reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024

Hahahaha, I am glad that you got the good drugs because then they aren't around for me. You are so funny tho.
I am glad that you weren't hurt worse. I really am.

reply by Dr. Nad on 18-Nov-2024

Thanks L O L I could not begin to compare to the challenges that you have faced but I had a week and a half or two where I wake up in the night in pain and had a hard time walking even with the walker. You are welcome for the stars Sis.

Comment from NanaGaye

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A wonderful birthday poem for Rhonda,I know she will love it. The rhyming and script are also great, but of course only to be expected from you creative poet. Also love your choice of music.
LOL NanaGaye

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024

Thanks so much, Sweetie, as you always shine so bright my way with those stars and your big heart and smile. You are a gem and I appreciate you so much. Lotsa love and hugs, Debi

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

I am happy to know that Rhonda is aging well here on the page and am so happy to celebrate here move into the thirty-nineth year. Happy Birthday to you, Rhonda.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024

Thanks Bill for the sweet words for Rhonda. I will make sure she get's to see this. Thanks again. Love, Debi

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Yeah, finally someone in my obviously protected an shallow world of contacts that I know. I'm so glad Wayne is doing well and on the mend!
Happy Birthday, Rhonda! And thanks for sharing, Debi!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

Yes, I just knew you would find someone you knew in my poems. After Rhonda has been in the same categories as you. This was meant to be silly and I don't know if you caught it but was only two rhymes throughout the whole thing. That is why I played some geeky music like Fly me to the moon. Because all the songs or singers were rhyming with the moon. Pat Boone, for the loving spoon. (Ful) but I am sure you caught my silliness in her poem as I thought she could use some cheering up and she said it did the trick.

Thanks for always a kind word, my dear friend. Love, Debi

reply by Ric Myworld on 06-Nov-2024

Yes, I picked up on your humor and enjoyed it immensely! 🤗

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Happy birthday Rhonda.
A sweet and fun poem Debi.
I'm sure it made Rhonda smile. She's going through a rough time so I'm sure a smile will lift her spirit.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024

Hi Janet, you always have such kind things to say, and I am so appreciative of them. I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her.

Thanks for the very kind comments, my dear friends. Love, Debi

Comment from karenina

Excellent

So? Looks like you sort of created your OWN form along the way and why not? If ever a person deserves a fun and happy birthday poem it is this lovely lady! She's been through it, hasn't she?

I'm glad you brought lots of smiles in this poem, Debi. I can attest your Smash-Ups are wonderful as well!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY RHONDA!

Way to go, Debi--

Karenina

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

Dearest Karenina, you are so much fun as you have something so sweet to say in all your comments about my poems for others. This one was different, a bit silly, and mostly meant to make her smile. Mission accomplished as she was very happy with her poem. Thanks again, my dear friend for always knowing just what to say. Love, Debi

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

Dearest Karenina, you are so much fun as you have something so sweet to say in all your comments about my poems for others. This one was different, a bit silly, and mostly meant to make her smile. Mission accomplished as she was very happy with her poem. Thanks again, my dear friend for always knowing just what to say. Love, Debi

Comment from EeanBlack

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You forgot Nat King Cole's "When I Fall In Love." I do, myself, believe in magic. The love of friends is a magical thing. I have said it before, you show such a deepness in your love for these people. I'm trying to use that in my daily life. People who know me still look bewildered when I say, "Good morning." I smile, and my face cracks, but, so does theirs. Your kind spirit is a gift not only to you but, also to us.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024

Hi Eean, haha, this silly little one is made up of two rhymes only and the line about Rhonda moves down one each time. So I had to come up with songs that had the rhyme with (soon). Thats why it was a Yellow Rose of Texas (tune) Fly me to the (Moon), then a song by Loving (Spoon) ful, one by Pat (Boone), and had him (croon) it really was silly, but she needed some silly in her day.

I do see that you are a tremendous blessing here yourself, as you build up instead of tear down. You are always more than kind and I am honored to call you a friend. Thank you so much for the kind words for Rhonda and her poem, and the gracious six stars. And of course you always leave a smile on my face when you are here. What a gift to leave in someone's review box!
Thanks again, my friend. Love, Debi
PS, so sorry for a couple long messages. You are a joy to talk to tho. Hugs!

reply by EeanBlack on 05-Nov-2024

Don't ever be sorry. I'm a busy guy, but I will always make time for God's friends.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Oh, Debi, I didn't know it was Rhonda's birthday. How lovely of you tou write her this beautiful birthday greetings, while she's going through such a hard time. Thanks a lot for doing that. Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024

Ulla, you are so awesome, and I always love your comments about my poems for others. This one was different, a bit silly, and mostly meant to make her smile. Mission accomplished as she was very, very happy with her poem. Thank you my dear friend for always having the sweetest comments. Love, Debi.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very nice birthday poem for Rhonda and I do wish her a very happy birthday as well and I do hope that her husband Wayne is doing much better and that she is feeling more peaceful. May you have a good day and may God bless your writing. Patricia.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024

Hi Patricia, you always have such kind things to say, and I am so appreciative of them. I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her.

Thanks for the very kind comments, my dear friends. Love, Debi

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

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I love this, Debi, it's so full of fun, humour and sincere friendship, everything that Rhonda deserves right now! I'm still amused by you bumping into Pat Boone:)) Happy Birthday, Rhonda - yet another very worthy member of the Scorpion family:)) Love Debbie

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024

Hi Debbie, you are so awesome, and I always love your comments about my poems for others. This one was different, a bit silly, and mostly meant to make her smile. Mission accomplished as she was very, very happy with her poem. Thanks for the six stars for it too.you my dear friend for always having the sweetest comments