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November 6, 2024

a poem

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Comment from Father Flaps
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Hi Bill,
That reminds me of Washington Irving's novel, "Rip Van Winkle", the man who slept for 20 years and couldn't believe all the changes.
I believe Donald Trump fooled a lot of people. He told them what they wanted to hear. And now he's rounding up migrants who he feels are all criminals. But they aren't. Some are, perhaps. But not the majority. And that reminds me of Hitler, rounding up Jews in 1938 Germany. It's too late to take back votes. It will be a new world order very soon. Biden is old. Trump dodged court proceedings. The world is still spinning, but slightly off center!
Nicely penned!
Cheers,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
    Today Trump proposed "recession" posting, which means he assigns, with no voting or vetting, department heads and other positions, as when Congress is in recess.
reply by Father Flaps on 13-Nov-2024
    Crazy stuff, eh Bill? I listened to some of it on CNN. People aren't too happy with one of his choices... Florida Representative Matt Gaetz to lead the Justice Department! They'll try to talk him out of it.

Comment from gansach
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I fell asleep while several key states were still being contested and woke to hear Trump giving an acceptance speech, thinking I was having a bad dream. Your poem has described that feeling perfectly. The nightmare is real~again!

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
    Hope we survive.
Comment from nomi338
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I wrote a poem that I am most proud of out of all the poems I have ever written. The point and or main message of the poem is that you may het by, but you do not get away. Hitler, Stalin, and so many other men of dubious acclaim, they all got by, but none got away. It may take years, but in the end they get what is their due. The troubling thing that we their victims must deal with is, how to survive until they are removed like a stubborn stain on humanity.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
    It took a world war to kill Hitler, and Stalin died of a stroke.
Comment from Wendy G
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Yes, it will spin in a crazy way. Fortunately, God is still in control, and He will remove Trump when the time is right. I can't believe that with his lack of integrity, his record of lies and criminal activities, and with his overt desire to be totally controlling, that so many would vote for him. Beyond my understanding.
Wendy

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
    We should remove the term "felon" from all job applications since one can be president with 34 convictions.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good artwork and presentation, Bill.
-Thanks for sharing this poem.
-You ask very good questions, and
make good points about them, especially
the one about Biden and democracy.
-You said it all in the last two lines,
and I am glad you shared this because
I wouldn't even know where to start!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Thanks, Pam
reply by Pam (respa) on 07-Nov-2024
    You are welcome, Bill.
Comment from mermaids
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Excellent use of words to capture the post election day. I like your last line "and the world will spin eccentrically." It certainly will. Apparently if you commit a crime and become president, you are free from justice as your poem states.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    I will need to do more crime to get ahead.
Comment from patcelaw
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This is well written, and I enjoyed listening to it. I do hope you're right in that fact that the Donald Trump will be freed from justice. It only stands the reason that those cases were gonna be thrown out against him anyway. Patricia.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Thanks, Patricia
Comment from ESOSTINE
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From a stranger's position, I believe that all hope of a better America and by extension a safer world under Trump is not lost. Thanks so much for sharing your beautiful poem. Regards.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    All felons should be allowed to get any job, since the president can.
Comment from jim vecchio
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Not only that, but there are no more 10 cent Twinkies and Clarabell went away and never come back.There are no more magazines.There's only one magazine. It's called The Magazine. There are no more news shows. There's only one news show. It's called "The Breaking News Show'. And there are no more channels to turn, only a convenient little remote.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    Whatever.
reply by jim vecchio on 06-Nov-2024
    No more words to say till next time.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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Thank you for writing this poem. This is exactly how I feel. How did this happen? What is going to happen to our country? These are the questions I am concerned about.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
    We will survive this too, Brenda.