Darkness
Poem about creatures of the night26 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent atmospheric poem about the hunting of the night. Inside, with the windows open one can hear the sounds, and see the sky of the owls and the rabbits going about the inevitability of life and death.
I enjoyed this very much. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Excellent atmospheric poem about the hunting of the night. Inside, with the windows open one can hear the sounds, and see the sky of the owls and the rabbits going about the inevitability of life and death.
I enjoyed this very much. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Gloria,
Thank you for the kind review. I live in the country and it's quiet at night. Eerily so sometimes.
Cecilia
Comment from Nicki.B
Another beautiful nature poem Cecilia. Capturing all the wonderful sound of evening in the countryside. I don't live in the country but we live near a horse trainers farm and sometimes he gets goats in for the grass. You can hear them sometimes but not as peaceful as the quiet in the countryside! Beautiful well done
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Another beautiful nature poem Cecilia. Capturing all the wonderful sound of evening in the countryside. I don't live in the country but we live near a horse trainers farm and sometimes he gets goats in for the grass. You can hear them sometimes but not as peaceful as the quiet in the countryside! Beautiful well done
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Nicki,
Thank you again for a lovely review. Yes, the country in the evening is awesome with all of nature coming out rummaging for food.
Cecilia
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
That knotty tree is beautiful. You told your story very well. I love when I had a small forest behind where I was living. I would walk around gathering twigs for starting our fire, and pine cones for crafting. Sometimes I would just sit and breath it all in. Good work. Karen
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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That knotty tree is beautiful. You told your story very well. I love when I had a small forest behind where I was living. I would walk around gathering twigs for starting our fire, and pine cones for crafting. Sometimes I would just sit and breath it all in. Good work. Karen
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Karen,
Thank you for the review. I have always loved walking in the woods/forest. It brings a sense of peace to me. When I first joined the Navy there were no forest around, so I for inner peace I turned to the ocean. Its sound are very soothing.
Cecilia
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Since I can't swim, And the sun is not my friend, water never had real appeal for me.
I am glad however that you could make the switch. :-)
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Oh, I'm sorry you don't know the pleasure of the ocean. It's very soothing.
Cecilia
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:-)
Comment from l.raven
Hi Cecilia, I love this poem...love the wording...
my parents were as country as it gets...rednecks...
same as my brother and sister...
my parents lived where Christ lost His sandals...in the
backwoods...
when I used to go visit them...I would sleep on the couch
in the living room...you could see out a big pane window...
and they had a tall pole with a bright light on it...every night
an owl would sit at the top of it...and I would watch him through
the night...my dad would throw corn in the prairie for the deer
at night...and I would watch them as well...along with all the
creators you mentioned in your poem...it was very surreal...
I love you poem...and love the picture...very well written my sweet friend...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Hi Cecilia, I love this poem...love the wording...
my parents were as country as it gets...rednecks...
same as my brother and sister...
my parents lived where Christ lost His sandals...in the
backwoods...
when I used to go visit them...I would sleep on the couch
in the living room...you could see out a big pane window...
and they had a tall pole with a bright light on it...every night
an owl would sit at the top of it...and I would watch him through
the night...my dad would throw corn in the prairie for the deer
at night...and I would watch them as well...along with all the
creators you mentioned in your poem...it was very surreal...
I love you poem...and love the picture...very well written my sweet friend...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind review and all those beautiful stars.
Cecilia
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always so very welcome sweet girl...
love xxoo
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Oh you are so sweet.
Cecilia
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Smiling so big....love ya...xxoo 😁😁🤗❤️
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from LJbutterfly
You have painted a very vivid picture of the sounds of a night in the country. As a city girl, you tweaked my imagination as I read your thorough, and enjoyable descriptions.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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You have painted a very vivid picture of the sounds of a night in the country. As a city girl, you tweaked my imagination as I read your thorough, and enjoyable descriptions.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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LJbutterfly,
Thank you for the kind review. I love living in country. There's a peace at night you can't quite find in the country.
Cecilia
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoy the way you've shared a picture of the night through sounds and movement! The way you describe the creatures in the darkness feels so alive. I especially like how you include the peaceful moments like the owl's hoot. Keep up the great work! Your poem really captures nature beautifully.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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I really enjoy the way you've shared a picture of the night through sounds and movement! The way you describe the creatures in the darkness feels so alive. I especially like how you include the peaceful moments like the owl's hoot. Keep up the great work! Your poem really captures nature beautifully.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Michael,
Thank you so much for the kind review.
Cecilia
Comment from Jacob1395
I've always loved how when the sun sets a different world comes to life, the nocturnal one and that we hear so many different creatures that we don't hear during the day. A well written piece, Cecilia, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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I've always loved how when the sun sets a different world comes to life, the nocturnal one and that we hear so many different creatures that we don't hear during the day. A well written piece, Cecilia, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Jacob,
Thank you for the kind review. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
Cecilia
Comment from zanya
Just love reading about the natural world and here in this poem is a feast for the senses as we share the sounds and pursuits of the night as it unfolds
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Just love reading about the natural world and here in this poem is a feast for the senses as we share the sounds and pursuits of the night as it unfolds
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your kind review.
I too love the night life.
Cecilia
Comment from Boogienights
I appreciate this poem,,it is colorful and descriptive. It makes me feel as if I'm there too, listening to the night sounds. I've always wanted to camp, and experience what you're talking about.:)
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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I appreciate this poem,,it is colorful and descriptive. It makes me feel as if I'm there too, listening to the night sounds. I've always wanted to camp, and experience what you're talking about.:)
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your kind review. The sound of the nightlife out here in the country is awesome. You should go camping an experience it.
Cecilia
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading it. I love nature too. I'm amazed by what God has given us. Very descriptive.and well written poem. Great job
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading it. I love nature too. I'm amazed by what God has given us. Very descriptive.and well written poem. Great job
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Brenda,
Thank you for the kind review. Yes, God has given us so many delightful things in nature. Like the fall colors, rainbows, sunrises, and sunsets. God is good.
Cecilia
