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Retirement

Jack and Jill went up the Hill St. Blues.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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I wasn't so enthralled where this story began, but in the end I had to chuckle. that was great, and I bet no one saw it coming. Well done.
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 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    Thanks, Tom.
Comment from RodG
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Very amusing and indeed the ending was a surprise. You did a terrific job of setting the scene and introducing the husband and wife who share a wonderful--if malicious--sense of humor. I even learned a new phrase--modus vivendi.
Rod

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
    Thanks, Rod. Appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I loved this post and I laughed my head off here with your unique and clever punchline. A well written story and I was entertained by the humour here, a sure winner for the contest, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
    Many thanks, Dolly.