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Jack and Jill went up the Hill St. Blues.
3 total reviews
Comment from
Tom Horonzy
I wasn't so enthralled where this story began, but in the end I had to chuckle. that was great, and I bet no one saw it coming. Well done.
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
Comment from
RodG
Very amusing and indeed the ending was a surprise. You did a terrific job of setting the scene and introducing the husband and wife who share a wonderful--if malicious--sense of humor. I even learned a new phrase--modus vivendi.
Rod
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
Thanks, Rod. Appreciated.
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
I loved this post and I laughed my head off here with your unique and clever punchline. A well written story and I was entertained by the humour here, a sure winner for the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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