The Kidnapping
Surprise Me Story contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well, they asked for fiction and fictionalized you done-did It was one chaotic scene after the other, and as for a surprise entry - very clever. Will you win. i d k but where's there is life there is hope. I was DQ'd for writing a true to life story which might as easily been fiction had I not mentioned it in my notes.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Well, they asked for fiction and fictionalized you done-did It was one chaotic scene after the other, and as for a surprise entry - very clever. Will you win. i d k but where's there is life there is hope. I was DQ'd for writing a true to life story which might as easily been fiction had I not mentioned it in my notes.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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That happened to me once where I was disqualified because it wasn't 'fiction.' thank you for the great review and stop in, Tom. I appreciate it, friend. Have yourself a great day.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this sounds like a Mission Impossible movie I managed to find myself in here and I enjoyed this action packed post full of eventful happenings, only to realised that this is fiction and you were writing this story for the contest! Ha ha ha, what a great surprise, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Ha ha ha, this sounds like a Mission Impossible movie I managed to find myself in here and I enjoyed this action packed post full of eventful happenings, only to realised that this is fiction and you were writing this story for the contest! Ha ha ha, what a great surprise, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Dolly. Yeah, I like my stories just as I like my movies, action packed. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece and the end gave you a chuckle. Have yourself a wonderful day.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow, this was a wild ride from start to finish! You paint such a clear picture of every move - I felt like I was watching a thriller unfold in real time. This was so entertaining - especially with the twist at the end! It's clever, fast-paced, and absolutely enjoyable - like a movie you can't look away from.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Wow, this was a wild ride from start to finish! You paint such a clear picture of every move - I felt like I was watching a thriller unfold in real time. This was so entertaining - especially with the twist at the end! It's clever, fast-paced, and absolutely enjoyable - like a movie you can't look away from.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the great review, Michael. I love action movies and writing the same. Lol. I appreciate the stars, M. I'm glad you liked the piece.