Help me Sleep
A poem for sound sleep15 total reviews
Comment from Lisa Carter1
I am sorry you haven't been able to sleep well mama Pat. I will pray for you and send some fairy dust your way to fall asleep every night. So sweet dreams mama Pat
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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I am sorry you haven't been able to sleep well mama Pat. I will pray for you and send some fairy dust your way to fall asleep every night. So sweet dreams mama Pat
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review my work and such a nice comment. you are special
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Patricia.
-I am sorry you have having a difficult
time sleeping because of dreams.
-Have you tried doing something relaxing
each night before you go to bed. Sometimes
a consistent pattern can be helpful.
-You wrote a very good prayer asking
for a restful night so your day will be better.
-Very good concluding lines that show the result.
-Take care and hope things get better each day.
-You went through a lot and sometimes the
body and mind need to adjust.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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-Nice image and presentation, Patricia.
-I am sorry you have having a difficult
time sleeping because of dreams.
-Have you tried doing something relaxing
each night before you go to bed. Sometimes
a consistent pattern can be helpful.
-You wrote a very good prayer asking
for a restful night so your day will be better.
-Very good concluding lines that show the result.
-Take care and hope things get better each day.
-You went through a lot and sometimes the
body and mind need to adjust.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. I appreciate
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Wendy G
Sleep is a precious and rare gift. I am a very light sleeper, and usually wake up feeling not refreshed, so I can identify with your prayer. Thank you for sharing from the heart.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Sleep is a precious and rare gift. I am a very light sleeper, and usually wake up feeling not refreshed, so I can identify with your prayer. Thank you for sharing from the heart.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for your review. It is much appreciated
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have to be so exhausted to sleep well, I can identify with your words here Patricia, sleep escapes in on occasions. A poignant poem, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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I have to be so exhausted to sleep well, I can identify with your words here Patricia, sleep escapes in on occasions. A poignant poem, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you for making the time to read and review my work. It is appreciated.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I too find if I am dreaming a lot my mind is too activd for a restful sleep. I hope your prayer helps you feel more restful overnight Patricia. Nicely done,
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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I too find if I am dreaming a lot my mind is too activd for a restful sleep. I hope your prayer helps you feel more restful overnight Patricia. Nicely done,
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my work
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a good prayer poem, Patricia. I'm sorry you have not been sleeping well. I like that you ask to have a good attitude and to be at peace with God. I love that you want to be ready to share your faith. I hope you rest well tonight. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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This is a good prayer poem, Patricia. I'm sorry you have not been sleeping well. I like that you ask to have a good attitude and to be at peace with God. I love that you want to be ready to share your faith. I hope you rest well tonight. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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I gratefully thank you for a very nice sweet view
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You're welcome. Rest well. Carol
Comment from lyenochka
I hope you get a good night's sleep. You may be resolving some problems with your active dreams. Praying that the Spirit will resolve your anxious thoughts so you can fully rest!
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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I hope you get a good night's sleep. You may be resolving some problems with your active dreams. Praying that the Spirit will resolve your anxious thoughts so you can fully rest!
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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With gratitude in my heart, I wish to thank you for
Comment from RJ Heritage
I have a problem of putting my mind to rest. When I am resting my mind keeps writing and writing. But I am refreshed when I wake.
I pray that you would find the restful b sleep you need. Your words express you t feeling quite well, and your picture strengthens the imagery.
RJ
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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I have a problem of putting my mind to rest. When I am resting my mind keeps writing and writing. But I am refreshed when I wake.
I pray that you would find the restful b sleep you need. Your words express you t feeling quite well, and your picture strengthens the imagery.
RJ
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for making time to read and review my work
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from royowen
I didn't sleep well last night even if I normally sleep well, but it says in scripture, He gives His beloved sleep, Psalm 127:2, it is amazing that this is an amazing scripture, thank you Pat, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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I didn't sleep well last night even if I normally sleep well, but it says in scripture, He gives His beloved sleep, Psalm 127:2, it is amazing that this is an amazing scripture, thank you Pat, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you for this very nice review it
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Most welcome
Comment from judiverse
If you have trouble sleeping, maybe you should try a sleep aid. I hope you are feeling well otherwise. Yes, having a good night's sleep helps you have a better attitude. Maybe you could keep a pen and paper handy and write down your thoughts on paper. That way you won't keep going over them in your mind. Well stated. Omit the comma after I will. judi
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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If you have trouble sleeping, maybe you should try a sleep aid. I hope you are feeling well otherwise. Yes, having a good night's sleep helps you have a better attitude. Maybe you could keep a pen and paper handy and write down your thoughts on paper. That way you won't keep going over them in your mind. Well stated. Omit the comma after I will. judi
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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I am always grateful when I get nice reviews like this. Thank you so much.
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You're very welcome. I hope you have a restful night tonight. judi
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You're very welcome. I hope you have a restful night tonight. judi
