Mother's Baby
Mothers always come through19 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Wonderfully clever! I was imagining the narrator as a little boy right down to the Aaagh moment! Faultlessly and engagingly written, this is a strong contender for the contest and I wish you luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Wonderfully clever! I was imagining the narrator as a little boy right down to the Aaagh moment! Faultlessly and engagingly written, this is a strong contender for the contest and I wish you luck! Debbie
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you. I love to write about cats so it's easy to stick them in a story.
Comment from LJbutterfly
I really enjoyed the way this story leads you to envision a sweet young boy protective of his mom, and smoothly flows into a satisfying, humorous and surprising ending. I was surprised a cat is telling the story. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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I really enjoyed the way this story leads you to envision a sweet young boy protective of his mom, and smoothly flows into a satisfying, humorous and surprising ending. I was surprised a cat is telling the story. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you. Cats are one of my favorite animals, and they are excellent judges of character. I can actually imagine a cat doing something like this.
Comment from Nicki.B
Haha! What a great story...I was wondering where it was going. Fred really did get his way and I'm sure it won't be the last time lol! I had a good giggle, well done!
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Haha! What a great story...I was wondering where it was going. Fred really did get his way and I'm sure it won't be the last time lol! I had a good giggle, well done!
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you. I love to write cat stories. Cats are excellent judges of character and It's not beyond them to do something of this nature.
Comment from BethShelby
This is cute story and as someone who has a cat as a basic companion and think I'd kick out someone who hurt my baby too. The surprise is that we originate Ly that this was about a child. Cats like to play using their claws and teeth but they usually don't break the skin if they are playing.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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This is cute story and as someone who has a cat as a basic companion and think I'd kick out someone who hurt my baby too. The surprise is that we originate Ly that this was about a child. Cats like to play using their claws and teeth but they usually don't break the skin if they are playing.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you. Cats can be vicious if they are threatened. Cats are an excellent judge of character, too.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm an old sucker for happy endings and this story couldn't have turned out any better, far as I'm concerned. LOL. Glad Fred got what was coming to him. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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I'm an old sucker for happy endings and this story couldn't have turned out any better, far as I'm concerned. LOL. Glad Fred got what was coming to him. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you. Cats are my weakness and my strength. I have five of them, and they are excellent judges of character.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
What a great story. I thought in the beginning you were talking about a little boy. Surprise it's a cat. What a genius you are. You fooled me and probably a lot of other readers.
Great job and good luck in your contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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What a great story. I thought in the beginning you were talking about a little boy. Surprise it's a cat. What a genius you are. You fooled me and probably a lot of other readers.
Great job and good luck in your contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you. That was the idea, to make readers think it was a little boy. Lol
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from Alex Biasin
As a cat lover myself - I can only applaud you for this story.
It is just what a cat would d0, and the reaction was spot on, hurt the cat & pay the consequences.
Good stuff.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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As a cat lover myself - I can only applaud you for this story.
It is just what a cat would d0, and the reaction was spot on, hurt the cat & pay the consequences.
Good stuff.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you. That's correct. If anyone hurt one of my cats, there would be hell to pay. Lol
Comment from Tom Horonzy
It's a good read though I only recognized the subject speaking was a cat more than halfway through. I mean.... dad? Are we speaking Tom or a husband, and if a Tom I guess they can vamboozle away too.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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It's a good read though I only recognized the subject speaking was a cat more than halfway through. I mean.... dad? Are we speaking Tom or a husband, and if a Tom I guess they can vamboozle away too.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you. I know several men who consider themselves cat or dog dads. My husband was one of them.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I absolutely loved this story, and it certainly surprised me! It's a lovely story for the contest, and funny too. You've done a good job at not letting the reader guess until the claws come out! The was hilarious! Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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I absolutely loved this story, and it certainly surprised me! It's a lovely story for the contest, and funny too. You've done a good job at not letting the reader guess until the claws come out! The was hilarious! Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you. I feel happy that you enjoyed the story. I love to write about cats.
Comment from Begin Again
Way to go! Let the reader believe the story was being told by a child and then bingo! it's a fluffy irate cat with it's claws set for battle. Good job and quite humourous.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Way to go! Let the reader believe the story was being told by a child and then bingo! it's a fluffy irate cat with it's claws set for battle. Good job and quite humourous.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Carol. I have been on this site sparingly lately. I miss reading your marvelous writings, but I will return when things slow down here.