The Ten Demandments
a poem16 total reviews
Comment from Tim Margetts
Amen and so say all of us
But where are the cheerleaders?
Ah, there they are in his bed chamber.
I love this bit of satire, it would be even funnier if it wasn't scarily close to true.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Amen and so say all of us
But where are the cheerleaders?
Ah, there they are in his bed chamber.
I love this bit of satire, it would be even funnier if it wasn't scarily close to true.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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I have received my beatings hip and thigh from the MAGA minions.
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Are they yellow and talk in funny voices like Gru's little hoard?
Comment from gansach
There is definitely something amiss with the law when a man being tried for federal and civil felonies can be elected President and then pardon himself and remove those prosecuting him from their positions. Your demandments are sadly all too possible and probable. Nicely done, Bill!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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There is definitely something amiss with the law when a man being tried for federal and civil felonies can be elected President and then pardon himself and remove those prosecuting him from their positions. Your demandments are sadly all too possible and probable. Nicely done, Bill!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Gail
Comment from EeanBlack
Since this is political, I REALLY DON'T WANT TO COMMENT. bUT SINCE IT'S JUST A BUNCH OF SHIT, HERE GOES. It is a piece disrespecting a duly elected president. I will honor that president as I did the last one. He has not or does not ask or demand for any of us to commit adultery daily. That is a lie on you. Trump has never committed a murder or been legally accused or indicted for such a crime.. He has never demanded that any of us buy his "graven image", nor will he. Basically, it's just the same as a political hit piece, with no legs to stand on, only opinion. The cool thing is, you are in America and you have the right to do this, WITHOUT FEAR OF RETALIATION. REMEMBER THOSE WORDS. You should write fiction, you're great at it.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Since this is political, I REALLY DON'T WANT TO COMMENT. bUT SINCE IT'S JUST A BUNCH OF SHIT, HERE GOES. It is a piece disrespecting a duly elected president. I will honor that president as I did the last one. He has not or does not ask or demand for any of us to commit adultery daily. That is a lie on you. Trump has never committed a murder or been legally accused or indicted for such a crime.. He has never demanded that any of us buy his "graven image", nor will he. Basically, it's just the same as a political hit piece, with no legs to stand on, only opinion. The cool thing is, you are in America and you have the right to do this, WITHOUT FEAR OF RETALIATION. REMEMBER THOSE WORDS. You should write fiction, you're great at it.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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It was a poem. Please eat shit.
Comment from Begin Again
I feel like I want to crawl under the covers for the next four years and wait for the world to stop crumbling at our feet. I can't imagine how someone who openly puts himself out there as a messenger of God, yet is such a vile person, could have such a following... it's like a cult. I fear where America is headed.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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I feel like I want to crawl under the covers for the next four years and wait for the world to stop crumbling at our feet. I can't imagine how someone who openly puts himself out there as a messenger of God, yet is such a vile person, could have such a following... it's like a cult. I fear where America is headed.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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We will see what's left in January, Carol
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Biden spent hundreds of billions on wars and he is controlled by the war mongers. He has dementia! Kamala has no back bone or experience. I really don't understand why Trump wants to be a president again. He almost died twice already. He has a great family and popular TV show.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Biden spent hundreds of billions on wars and he is controlled by the war mongers. He has dementia! Kamala has no back bone or experience. I really don't understand why Trump wants to be a president again. He almost died twice already. He has a great family and popular TV show.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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His first priority was to stay out of jail and the second is to keep his money. This is the golden ring for him.
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I hear that without a criminal history, he will not go to jail for sure. If he stays out of the politics, no one would have bothered him.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
As if we didn't know!
#1 Treat women and children like chattel
#2 Keep buying votes and positions
#3 Keep encouraging Faux news to lie brazenly to the public to skew public opinion
#4 Keep buying ads to keep "our" candidates chasing seats
#5 Hire only men, them pesky women need to be subdued
#6 Insist we institute more rules for our womenfolk, because they should not have to think for themselves.
#7 Send all women employees home by five so they can cook supper for their menfolk.
#8 A picture of trump is to be right beside your one of Jesus
#9 Instead of in God we trust it will say In Trump we trust on our bills.
#10 At 7am bright and early on all channels We have "Trump Talks" on all channels. 15 minutes of his thoughts finished off by a self serving prayer. Karen
#8
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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As if we didn't know!
#1 Treat women and children like chattel
#2 Keep buying votes and positions
#3 Keep encouraging Faux news to lie brazenly to the public to skew public opinion
#4 Keep buying ads to keep "our" candidates chasing seats
#5 Hire only men, them pesky women need to be subdued
#6 Insist we institute more rules for our womenfolk, because they should not have to think for themselves.
#7 Send all women employees home by five so they can cook supper for their menfolk.
#8 A picture of trump is to be right beside your one of Jesus
#9 Instead of in God we trust it will say In Trump we trust on our bills.
#10 At 7am bright and early on all channels We have "Trump Talks" on all channels. 15 minutes of his thoughts finished off by a self serving prayer. Karen
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Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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People laugh now, but I fear the worst.
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We will survive. Love to you and yours. Karen
Comment from nomi338
I fear that the day will come when I might have to be exorcized, because I ain't doin none of that crap to please Don or the simple minded foils who worship at his feet.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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I fear that the day will come when I might have to be exorcized, because I ain't doin none of that crap to please Don or the simple minded foils who worship at his feet.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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They are working day and night to break America in January.
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We cannot allow that to happen. I notice the shocking fact that the key players are not veterans.
Comment from Wendy G
Very cleverly written, and unfortunately it expresses valid feelings and concerns about his character and personality, and the fearful prospect of how he may act in the future when he ensures he has total power.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Very cleverly written, and unfortunately it expresses valid feelings and concerns about his character and personality, and the fearful prospect of how he may act in the future when he ensures he has total power.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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No one seems to grasp the power he now has.
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We in Australia do, and we are amazed at how this happened.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Very creative poem about Trump. I believe you pretty much captured the way ge is. I'm dreading the next couple of months. We just have to take one day at a time. Well written.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Very creative poem about Trump. I believe you pretty much captured the way ge is. I'm dreading the next couple of months. We just have to take one day at a time. Well written.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Brenda
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear, this is dark humour Bill and I hope you can let sleeping dogs lie in the end. Trump has been made out to be such a villain here, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Oh dear, this is dark humour Bill and I hope you can let sleeping dogs lie in the end. Trump has been made out to be such a villain here, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Time will show you what we already know.