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My Aunt Margaret

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Comment from Gayla putnam
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I am enjoying the continuing saga of aunt Margaret. I don't think the evil Kenneth Moore has a chance, but I must move on to the next chapter. It's a great read. Even though she is a serial killer its relatively light hearted. gayla

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    I appreciate the read and nice comments. I just dropped#4 and am working on #5 Karen
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Karen,

Another great chapter to your book. You pull your reader into the story as if they were on the sidelines watching. Like any good author you keep your reader on the edge of their seat wanting more.

Great job

Cecilia

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    Thanks for the read. I am having a good time writing this. I will keep writing as long as you like to read it. Or until I run out of ideas. Karen
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 25-Nov-2024
    Karen,

    You're welcome. I'll keep reading as long as you keep writing.

    Cecilia
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    If you get an idea, I am always open to listen. If I use it I will mention it in author notes.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 25-Nov-2024
    Karen,

    If I think of something. You seem to be doing a great job on your own,

    Cecilia
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    :-)
Comment from LJbutterfly
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I like the plot to this story. An adopted daughter finds out all sorts of horrors about her mother, or aunt, as she call her, after her death. You've described a very ugly character, Kenneth Moore. It will be interesting to see how he is brought down. Now...What's in the box?

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
    I will review more so I can drop #3 later today Thanks for the read karen
Comment from Sanku
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Misty marshall has to be saved That is Margaret's mission and that too from a worm like Kenneth Moore. He is going to fall in the trap of Lavinia Lancaster(I love your naming process,the alliterations come naturally to you) Now I am waiting..

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
    Kenneth was not worthy of alliteration. Thanks for the read . As soon as I have enough points from reviewing I will drop another. Karen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Well that absolutely beautiful lady in your visual has certainly won my heart with her desire to right wrongs in, possibly, quite an appropriately severe fashion. Love the way you include all your alliterative excellence here. Well done, Karen. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
    Thanks for the read and your clear headed thinking.
    More to come after I review to get points. Karen
Comment from T B Botts
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Hey Karen,
I believe it's a biblical saying that whoever loves money never has enough. True enough. What a waste of time trying to accumulate wealth, when it is so short lived. This guy sounds like a real psycho. It takes all kinds to make up this world. Fortunately there are people like Margaret to balance out the bad guys. Well done gal.
Blessings,
Tom

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
    Margaret does not like to kill. But sometimes it is the only solution. We will see more history and troubles down the line.Thanks for the read, and following all the kinds of writing that I do. Karen
Comment from lyenochka
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Another great chapter! I think you've won over your audience as to cheering for Margaret and we hope she will so smart that it will not be an actual crime but a psychological one. Maybe.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
    Margaret does not like to kill. But sometimes it is the only solution. We will see more history and troubles down the line.Thanks for the read, and following all the kinds of writing that I do. Karen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Great story of her beginning of life as a PI. No one should do that to friends or other nice people just to take everything, including their self-respect. Auntie was very smart about her way to get to the charmer.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
    Margaret does not like to kill. But sometimes it is the only solution. We will see more history and troubles down the line.Thanks for the read, and following all the kinds of writing that I do. Karen
Comment from patcelaw
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Interesting imagination when it come
To a serial Killer and I am enjoying the stories. I'm not much into mystery stories or in killing stories but this has been kind of fun. May you have a blessed day and may God bless you with a nice weekend.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
    Margaret did not like killing. She tried to avoid it, but, if she reasoned that they would never stop, she dispatched them to the place that gives the pain. We will see what her daughter does with the information. Thanks for the read. Karen -
Comment from jim vecchio
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I presume you borrowed the name of Kenneth More, a famous English actor who played many happy-go-lucky fellows and also made movies like "Sink The Bismarck". I'm now waiting to see how she did it. Now you have material for lots of murders.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
    The name came to me, and, until you mentioned it. I did not remember where from. Thank you. Margaret did not like killing. She tried to avoid it, but, if she reasoned that they would never stop, she dispatched them to the place that gives the pain. We will see what her daughter does with the information. Thanks for the read. Karen -
reply by jim vecchio on 22-Nov-2024
    I'm sure with you writing it, the tlae will be well worth reading!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
    I love you too, you know.
reply by jim vecchio on 23-Nov-2024
    If I were only 40 years younger!
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
    I love your brain. And age does not matter there honey bunch.
    Karen
reply by jim vecchio on 24-Nov-2024
    Thank you for those kind words!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    :-)