My Aunt Margaret
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Comment from T B Botts
Hello Karen,
It sounds like Aunt Margaret was quite the vigilante. I'm in the dark about a frac pit. I've never heard of such a thing. Is it anything like a fire pit? I imagine if a fire got hot enough it would pretty much destroy any evidence, but I don't know. I've never offed anybody. I'll look you up for some advice if I ever do. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving gal.
Blessings,
Tom
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Hello Karen,
It sounds like Aunt Margaret was quite the vigilante. I'm in the dark about a frac pit. I've never heard of such a thing. Is it anything like a fire pit? I imagine if a fire got hot enough it would pretty much destroy any evidence, but I don't know. I've never offed anybody. I'll look you up for some advice if I ever do. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving gal.
Blessings,
Tom
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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A frac pit is a reservior of deadly chemicals that come from oil fracking. The residue from leeching out the oil.Deadly. Handy for murderers though. Thanks for the read. Karen
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Thanks for clarifying that. I imagine it would come in handy for nefarious purposes. I suppose no one ever checks them out, so perhaps there are lots of corpses in them that will never be found.
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You never know. :-) Happy Turkey Day. We are having Ham. Love to you and yours. Karen
Comment from Douglas Goff
I must say that everything is making better sense now that I have read them all in reverse.
I do like the Aunt Margaret character. Of course, as a law dog, I like anyone who serves up a healthy dish of Just Desserts!
Douglas.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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I must say that everything is making better sense now that I have read them all in reverse.
I do like the Aunt Margaret character. Of course, as a law dog, I like anyone who serves up a healthy dish of Just Desserts!
Douglas.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Well, I am going to have to put a number in the title. Thanks for the read. Happy turkey day. Karen
Comment from karenina
It's a real kick to cheer on your Aunt and be legit happy he of many names will soon be no "Moore."
The best attribute of an effective writer is a uniquely definable style.
This is pure "KCT" -- AND I'd know it immediately!
You could be the next Evanovich!
Please!
:)
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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It's a real kick to cheer on your Aunt and be legit happy he of many names will soon be no "Moore."
The best attribute of an effective writer is a uniquely definable style.
This is pure "KCT" -- AND I'd know it immediately!
You could be the next Evanovich!
Please!
:)
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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I am good on short stories. And funny things from real life. I can write many ways, but It is hard too write a long tale. I enjoy writing about new stuff. We will see how I can make this fresh. How long can this last? I don't know. Thanks again for reading me.Karen
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I try not to miss your posts!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
It sounds as if a lot of women will be avenged when she finally ends the career of Kenneth Moore. I assume the disposal of a body by dissolving is Kenneth's fate. In the second to the last paragraph, last sentence, you slipped out of first person.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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It sounds as if a lot of women will be avenged when she finally ends the career of Kenneth Moore. I assume the disposal of a body by dissolving is Kenneth's fate. In the second to the last paragraph, last sentence, you slipped out of first person.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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I edited that bit of the third person talking. Thanks for mentioning it. I thank you for the read. I just dropped #4 and am working on #5 Karen
Comment from lyenochka
Okay, this gave us a little more information. I liked the secret language that the two have. I'm not sure what happened and if or when someone was "dissolved." I also wasn't sure who this "she" referred to in:
"She loved her aunt but she did not have a clue."
The narrator is the niece but I'm not sure why this is in third person.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Okay, this gave us a little more information. I liked the secret language that the two have. I'm not sure what happened and if or when someone was "dissolved." I also wasn't sure who this "she" referred to in:
"She loved her aunt but she did not have a clue."
The narrator is the niece but I'm not sure why this is in third person.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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I edited that bit of the third person talking. Thanks for mentioning it. I thank you for the read. I just dropped #4 and am working on #5 Karen
Comment from GWHARGIS
Very interesting woman , this aunt of hers. Finding out someone you love is a serial killer would be slightly traumatic, I would imagine. Wondering if the nice will follow in her footsteps. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Very interesting woman , this aunt of hers. Finding out someone you love is a serial killer would be slightly traumatic, I would imagine. Wondering if the nice will follow in her footsteps. Gretchen
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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I edited that bit of the third person talking. I thank you for the read. I just dropped #4 and am working on #5 Karen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I know all about dissolving the body in the bath and ending up dissolving the bath as well. Wasn't that in Breaking Bad or am I getting mixed up with something else? This is a lengthy read, Karen, and would have benefitted, I think, from being edited down with a little less diversion. But an enjoyable read. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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I know all about dissolving the body in the bath and ending up dissolving the bath as well. Wasn't that in Breaking Bad or am I getting mixed up with something else? This is a lengthy read, Karen, and would have benefitted, I think, from being edited down with a little less diversion. But an enjoyable read. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Breaking bad is where the tub went through the ceiling. Blacklist is where it was done properly. Series must be fluffed, otherwise there would only be 2 chapters. Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from kahpot
" And a frac pit" I will have to look this up, but it sounds very lethal, as always, your description of places and characters are marvelous, and I look forward to finding out how these crims meet their end, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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" And a frac pit" I will have to look this up, but it sounds very lethal, as always, your description of places and characters are marvelous, and I look forward to finding out how these crims meet their end, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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I thank you for the read. And nice comments. I just dropped #4 and am working on #5 Karen
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Karen,
This is a great chapter in your book. Having a serial killer in the family. That had to be an interesting discovery after her aunt died. Looking forward to more.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Karen,
This is a great chapter in your book. Having a serial killer in the family. That had to be an interesting discovery after her aunt died. Looking forward to more.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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I thank you for the read. I just dropped #4 and am working on #5 Karen
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Karen,
You're welcome. I'm on it
Cecilia
Comment from jim vecchio
It will be very interesting to see how they-I mean, he, gets his just rewards. I hope you keep this going awhile. I also hope only the ones who really need justice will get what they deserve.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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It will be very interesting to see how they-I mean, he, gets his just rewards. I hope you keep this going awhile. I also hope only the ones who really need justice will get what they deserve.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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I thank you for the read. I just dropped #4 and am working on #5 Karen
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I will be looking forwrd to it!
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I am working on #5 Karen