Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Miracles - Chap 22"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
19 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Oh, so the baby might be Donatellis. That would make a whole new scenario. I love it and I will be looking forward to seeing how you'll handled it all. Hugs, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Oh, so the baby might be Donatellis. That would make a whole new scenario. I love it and I will be looking forward to seeing how you'll handled it all. Hugs, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Thanks for taking the time to read another chapter, Ulla. It's been an incredible story for me, and completing it feels so good. A lot is happening in every chapter, so take your time, and when you can, I hope you will read the rest,
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Esther Brown
I hung on to every word! The tension building on several scenarios at once and flipping back and forth is a style that suits your writing well. I think this is my favorite of your stories so far. Well written. Esther
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I hung on to every word! The tension building on several scenarios at once and flipping back and forth is a style that suits your writing well. I think this is my favorite of your stories so far. Well written. Esther
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from karenina
Yippee! I do love me a chapter full of happy endings...or middles...or new beginnings!
I'm smiling ear to ear. 28 weeks! If anything can snap Donatelli into awareness this will!
Karenina
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Yippee! I do love me a chapter full of happy endings...or middles...or new beginnings!
I'm smiling ear to ear. 28 weeks! If anything can snap Donatelli into awareness this will!
Karenina
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I like the "happy parts too! Our little one can survive at 28 weeks and it proves that the baby is his not the rapist. Now to get Donatelli's head on straight.
Smiles, Carol
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Yup-- So one more chapter, tomorrow? And a happy ending, I'm sure! I can't wait!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
That saved a DNA test for finding out the father with the AB negative blood donor already there. Another great read, Carol. I like the friendship between Garth and Eleanor, and what a great name for her granddaughter. cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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That saved a DNA test for finding out the father with the AB negative blood donor already there. Another great read, Carol. I like the friendship between Garth and Eleanor, and what a great name for her granddaughter. cheers,
valda
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
It is good to know the baby was the child of the rapist .I sure when thing get back to normal the parents will be thrilled . Is mathew in any shape to give blood. I expcting you to work everything out for a happy ending.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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It is good to know the baby was the child of the rapist .I sure when thing get back to normal the parents will be thrilled . Is mathew in any shape to give blood. I expcting you to work everything out for a happy ending.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
This chapter was intense! It feels like this massive wall of good and evil colliding. You have the reader hoping so much for Donatelli and Jenna, Rebecca and Garth.
And now a precious little baby at stake.
Excellent chapter. There may have been spag errors, but I wouldn't know....was too sucked into the story! JK...looked good.
Julie
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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This chapter was intense! It feels like this massive wall of good and evil colliding. You have the reader hoping so much for Donatelli and Jenna, Rebecca and Garth.
And now a precious little baby at stake.
Excellent chapter. There may have been spag errors, but I wouldn't know....was too sucked into the story! JK...looked good.
Julie
:-)
** This reviewer has pledged to rate in accordance with site guidelines.**
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
What good news! Don't you love being a writer, you have the power to right the world, the child deserves to have a good natural father and mother, and father naturally, how wonderful, meanwhile Rossi is st the gate, well dine, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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What good news! Don't you love being a writer, you have the power to right the world, the child deserves to have a good natural father and mother, and father naturally, how wonderful, meanwhile Rossi is st the gate, well dine, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
It would be amazing for Jenna if Matthew did turn out to be the father of her baby. This was a really intense read and I really felt that as they were waiting for news of Jenna and the baby. Another excellent chapter, Carol, I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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It would be amazing for Jenna if Matthew did turn out to be the father of her baby. This was a really intense read and I really felt that as they were waiting for news of Jenna and the baby. Another excellent chapter, Carol, I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
"Frankie's phone buzzed urgently." A phone isn't going to buzz any differently no matter the situation; I would recommend removing "urgently".
You told me you had a few "surprises" in store, and this certainly is a surprise. I hope it's true that Matthew is the father, and I hope he recovers to learn he is a father.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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"Frankie's phone buzzed urgently." A phone isn't going to buzz any differently no matter the situation; I would recommend removing "urgently".
You told me you had a few "surprises" in store, and this certainly is a surprise. I hope it's true that Matthew is the father, and I hope he recovers to learn he is a father.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
It's good to know Jenna's baby isn't from her rapist. Donatelli, if he ever regains his memory, is going to be very happy. Garth is a pretty happy guy too when it seems Rebecca returns his warm feelings. Of course, the bad guys show up just as everything seems to be going so well. You write a story with a lot of action and romance, too.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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It's good to know Jenna's baby isn't from her rapist. Donatelli, if he ever regains his memory, is going to be very happy. Garth is a pretty happy guy too when it seems Rebecca returns his warm feelings. Of course, the bad guys show up just as everything seems to be going so well. You write a story with a lot of action and romance, too.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Do not reply to my reviews. You have too much to do and you need a life yourself beyond the wonderful lives you have given your characters.