Miracles
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Comment from karenina
Oh no! I don't know how you balance all of this on the head of a pin...
What I do know is the blood is there, it seems Donatelli is fighting his way out of his fog and I'm stretched tight as a guitar string wording about Lexington!
Onward!
Karenina
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Oh no! I don't know how you balance all of this on the head of a pin...
What I do know is the blood is there, it seems Donatelli is fighting his way out of his fog and I'm stretched tight as a guitar string wording about Lexington!
Onward!
Karenina
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Lexington is a bad guy (much more than Frankie) but he has a soft spot too.... for diamonds! LOL
Smiles, Carol
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LOL is right. His heart is as hard as diamonds, I think.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Donatelli's amnesia, for Eleanor, is hard to deal with, considering Jenna's situation. You've shown her emotions well. As for the deal going down, I'm a bit skeptical about that. Well done Carol. Really enjoying these characters.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Donatelli's amnesia, for Eleanor, is hard to deal with, considering Jenna's situation. You've shown her emotions well. As for the deal going down, I'm a bit skeptical about that. Well done Carol. Really enjoying these characters.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
I thought Rossi was so tough the only way to with him was to kill him. I am wondering if everything will go smoothly here. You are writing to story too fast for me to keep up with. I think you'll wrap this book up with not problem.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I thought Rossi was so tough the only way to with him was to kill him. I am wondering if everything will go smoothly here. You are writing to story too fast for me to keep up with. I think you'll wrap this book up with not problem.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
I don't know...no honor between thieves and all that. Very high suspense. Carol, I was actually running this through my head like a movie as I read it!
A question....Rossi gave them a two-hour notice. Why not just call in the authorities? Is this location a secret because Frankie is a former mobster or something?
One nitpick:
I don't think this phone has rang in years,
(has rung)
On to the next chapter, cause I'm hangin' here!
Julie
:-)
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I don't know...no honor between thieves and all that. Very high suspense. Carol, I was actually running this through my head like a movie as I read it!
A question....Rossi gave them a two-hour notice. Why not just call in the authorities? Is this location a secret because Frankie is a former mobster or something?
One nitpick:
I don't think this phone has rang in years,
(has rung)
On to the next chapter, cause I'm hangin' here!
Julie
:-)
** This reviewer has pledged to rate in accordance with site guidelines.**
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Fixed........
I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Poor Donatelli can remember little of the good part of the past and may have trouble trusting that the baby is his. Frankie seems to have less trouble trusting Lexington that I think he should. Or maybe he is prepared to take out all the bad men, except that would ruin his retirement.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Poor Donatelli can remember little of the good part of the past and may have trouble trusting that the baby is his. Frankie seems to have less trouble trusting Lexington that I think he should. Or maybe he is prepared to take out all the bad men, except that would ruin his retirement.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
Is Lexington trustworthy, instinct says that this man is about as reliable as John Doyle is, but the AB negative is here, and fresh, (I wonder how?) but at least the baby will be safe, and Donatelli, well we'll find out, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Is Lexington trustworthy, instinct says that this man is about as reliable as John Doyle is, but the AB negative is here, and fresh, (I wonder how?) but at least the baby will be safe, and Donatelli, well we'll find out, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Aren't you the shrewd one. You're not letting us know what the deal is. However, lots of other things are taking shape. You have two mobster types trusting each other as businessman. Can't wait to see how this turns out.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Aren't you the shrewd one. You're not letting us know what the deal is. However, lots of other things are taking shape. You have two mobster types trusting each other as businessman. Can't wait to see how this turns out.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
Matthew really does need to remember what he and Jenna once had before his accident. It's heartbreaking seeing him speak about Jenna in this way. A well written piece, Carol, I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Matthew really does need to remember what he and Jenna once had before his accident. It's heartbreaking seeing him speak about Jenna in this way. A well written piece, Carol, I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Donatelli's brain scrambled like eggs, we just have to wonder how long it's going to be before he comes to any semblance of reality. At the mercy of the torturer with the pen. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Donatelli's brain scrambled like eggs, we just have to wonder how long it's going to be before he comes to any semblance of reality. At the mercy of the torturer with the pen. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Is it though? Hmm. I don't trust him. I cannot see Rossi meakly walking up to Garth and giving himself in, not unless Lexington makes a deal with him as well. The only think Lexi wants is whatever it is that Garth has promised to hand over to him. Once he has that I can see it will be a shootout, or something else, but it won't end with another handshake, I'm sure of that!! Well done, my friend. You are getting there! Love and hugs from Me! :)) xxxx
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Is it though? Hmm. I don't trust him. I cannot see Rossi meakly walking up to Garth and giving himself in, not unless Lexington makes a deal with him as well. The only think Lexi wants is whatever it is that Garth has promised to hand over to him. Once he has that I can see it will be a shootout, or something else, but it won't end with another handshake, I'm sure of that!! Well done, my friend. You are getting there! Love and hugs from Me! :)) xxxx
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol