Demure Girl
The word demure is the word of the year.17 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for sharing the image, notes, and poem, Patricia.
-I didn't know this was the word of the year.
-You wrote a good nonet about it.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good use of alliteration in line two.
-You do a good job characterizing her
and how she would like the young man
to ask her to go to the prom.
-Very well done; Happy Thanksgiving.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
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-Thanks for sharing the image, notes, and poem, Patricia.
-I didn't know this was the word of the year.
-You wrote a good nonet about it.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good use of alliteration in line two.
-You do a good job characterizing her
and how she would like the young man
to ask her to go to the prom.
-Very well done; Happy Thanksgiving.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
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Gratitude of a heart I wish to thank you for a nice review
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You are very welcome and deserving.
Comment from evilynne
That is the word of the year. Your author's note helps us to understand the meaning. The poem and picture tell the story. The young lady looks quite demure. Evi
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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That is the word of the year. Your author's note helps us to understand the meaning. The poem and picture tell the story. The young lady looks quite demure. Evi
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work
Comment from ESOSTINE
Your poem is a tribute to a a woman of beauty in character, a woman wo is reserved, modest and shy. The word, modesty, appears to be a distant description of many of our today's girls. Thanks for sharing your poem, dear Pat, and teaching me a new word. Best regards,
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Your poem is a tribute to a a woman of beauty in character, a woman wo is reserved, modest and shy. The word, modesty, appears to be a distant description of many of our today's girls. Thanks for sharing your poem, dear Pat, and teaching me a new word. Best regards,
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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You are always appreciated. Thank you so much.
Comment from Bill Schott
This nonet, Demure Girl, has the proper formatting and seems to describe the woman in the picture who has won a heart through being herself and not someone she is not.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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This nonet, Demure Girl, has the proper formatting and seems to describe the woman in the picture who has won a heart through being herself and not someone she is not.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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It has always special when I get nice reviews like this thank you
Comment from Wendy G
I was surprised to hear that it is word of the year, so I looked it up, and apparently the resurge in popularity is due to a certain beauty influencer who uses the word a lot - but her own looks are far from demure! Thanks for sharing your Nonet about this - and let's hope more young women choose to become truly demure.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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I was surprised to hear that it is word of the year, so I looked it up, and apparently the resurge in popularity is due to a certain beauty influencer who uses the word a lot - but her own looks are far from demure! Thanks for sharing your Nonet about this - and let's hope more young women choose to become truly demure.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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It is always appreciated when I get nice reviews such as thank you you
Comment from GWHARGIS
I have been hearing that word a lot lately. I though maybe they had changed it to mean something else, but who knows. Very nice poem. I like the old fashioned feel. Not flaunting but old fashioned romance. Gretchen
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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I have been hearing that word a lot lately. I though maybe they had changed it to mean something else, but who knows. Very nice poem. I like the old fashioned feel. Not flaunting but old fashioned romance. Gretchen
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Your review is special thank you so much
Comment from DonandVicki
I had to look up the word in the Thesaurus, I had a general idea of what the word meant, but you do not hear it used much these days. A lovely nonet, and demure.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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I had to look up the word in the Thesaurus, I had a general idea of what the word meant, but you do not hear it used much these days. A lovely nonet, and demure.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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It is special when I get nice reviews like
Comment from Teri7
Patricia, This is a very nice and well written poem using the word demure in it. You used a very lovely picture to go with your words. It paints a lovely picture! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Patricia, This is a very nice and well written poem using the word demure in it. You used a very lovely picture to go with your words. It paints a lovely picture! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Thank you for making time to read a review my work. I appreciate it.
Comment from Carol Clark2
It's interesting that 'demure' would be chosen as the word of the year, when much of our world is blatantly erotic. Perhaps it's a call for the pendulum to shift a little. Good nonet, with a nice picture. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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It's interesting that 'demure' would be chosen as the word of the year, when much of our world is blatantly erotic. Perhaps it's a call for the pendulum to shift a little. Good nonet, with a nice picture. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate
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You're welcome. Good to know the word of the year. Carol
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You're welcome, Patricia. Happy Thanksgiving!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Patricia,
This is an awesome Nonet poem. It flows so smoothly. You are a pro at them. You are a great poet and I'm learning a lot from you.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Patricia,
This is an awesome Nonet poem. It flows so smoothly. You are a pro at them. You are a great poet and I'm learning a lot from you.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you for making that to read to my work
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Patricia,
You're welcome
Cecilia